writersnetwarkMost probably the best of your creation till date . Each word and teary pearls placed on the mark with extreme perfection . The emotions updated per line and the way torn feelings are written here is absolutely commendable . This feels so vibrant and heartfelt at every square of verse you decorated fabulously. And it's so soothing and face rendering rhymes lined magically . Efficient to leave any one stunned amazed and spellbound . What a marvellous , magnificent and melancholic masterpiece it is . Indeed an epic .
Look inside the chambers of my beating heart to see the vibrant colours that create such a rich tapestry woven over decades from all of the love that has pumped through my capillaries and ventricles arteries and atriums.
Shimmering gold - my beautiful mother who graciously taught me the meaning of family and selfless devotion.
Crayola blue - my gaggle of cheeky brothers who gifted me a childhood of fun and excitement and daring escapades.
Bubblegum pink - my adored girl cousins who have given me a lifetime of unwavering support and bonded sisterhood.
Parakeet green - my jovial aunties and uncles constant visitors who laughed loud and often and made everything entertaining.
Boysenberry purple - my wonderful friends who have remained faithful down through the years despite life's many obstacles.
Scarlet red - my incredible lover and muse who asks for so little yet gives me so much and is my greatest advocate.
Sunshine yellow - my two delightful sons who bring me such joy and fill my heart to bursting just for being who they are.
These people are my lifeblood my past my present and my future the pit-a-pat reminding me it's great to be alive.
This is the gallery of my heart and the very brush strokes that have helped make my life such a wonderful masterpiece that is yet to be finished.
It was a gloomy evening that awakened your memory from last night. Damn! your eyes which I could gaze all night that guides me as a light to the garden of love I wasn't afraid of getting lost in your arms, I don't really know you that well to hang out yet i followed my stupid guts to wander. We found a river in the middle of the garden Strange isn't it? Just like him, oh look look there's a golden bridge too.
We were standing or floating? as the breeze passes through. I wasn't expecting but he came close took my hands and clutched with his, the mere touch itself got me weak on my knees. He pointed the river and started whispering against my ears "did you see that river she flows wild, no hard rock or mountain nor dam could hold her, just like air around us which can't be caged, she's unstoppable always running through don't know to what place must be somewhere to settle in the safest arm - just like you". I turned to look at you and you to me. We leaned our foreheads against each other's I could hear the heart beating out of our chest as our breathe collides. Of course it was a chill night yet it felt warmth around him. We were about to....
"Then there's a whooshing sound of train intrudes which brought me back to my reality".
It was magical for a minute he started to fade away slowly. Should I feel happy to meet him even knowing that he was just a dream(beautiful dream) or be sad that it just ends without a kiss.!?