shrihari_nandiniOmg how well you have written this! Great skills I must say and a very nice message too All I wish to say is that a being is eternal and that's his true personality, everything else changes but the Atma is undecaying, a person who knows this stays at peace forever! Everything is achieved by him for he has no fear at all. Your write-up is a great portrayal of an ambitious mind that hungers madly for what he wants and strives hard till he achieves his goal. Another Awesome Poetry! Keep Writing! Jaya ShriHari!
manuhereGlad you loved .Thank you. and yes you have a valid point bht to keep your sanity all the way through is sometimes difficult .The world.dosen't work that way.however one should thrive to learn how to keep the inner peace intact ,but since that wasn't the theme ,didn't included it here.God bless @shrihari_nandini
shrihari_nandini@manuhere Yes I knew the gist of your poem, hence it's very well! Of course right, I am saying this but even I can relate to this poem, for even I am an ordinary person, what I was speaking of were persons of great intellect with their minds in control ☺ We say that it's the way of world but not to forget that we constitute that very world. Yes I agree to your point that we have to be ruthless, all I wished to say was that though being ruthless is our way to tackle the problem, it is not the only way ☺ this is so for our mind is not strong enough to bear all the pain the world gives, hence we have to strike back to keep ourselves intact. That's my point, hence your poem is absolutely correct according to how the modern man is and how he has to live in order to survive the battles of World. Jaya ShriHari! ShriHari bless you! ☺♥
manuhereOkay enough cardio for your fingers (or thumb,whatever you type with). Noble thoughts