Sometimes your victory can be hollow
Especially if you left victims in your wake to get to the top
©wilmaneels1
©25032021
#victoryc
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wilmaneels1 66w
25 0 2tuiethetweety 66w
" Victory"
victory isn't always about winning,
defeating any opponents coming across.
fighting war without even caring about life,
finishing the rivals with the inflicted bleeding wound,bruises,torn attires and immense tier.
finally winning the battle is undoubtedly a great
achievemental any fighter could ever have.
Thereby it's definitely win,yet to be victory.
victory isn't necessarily found in the battle fields.
It's also not actually found when belittling anybody,or have a final say in arguments.
achieving success by cashing anybody's
weakness,vulnerability and politeness.
cheating someone and getting own's wishes and
the desired things in a wrong manner can
be anything but a victory,as it's a temporary phase of time,which later leads to consequences
Real victory lies in our strength,honesty,integrity.
if you could control your fury and anger at the
time of their occurrence and remain calm.
Then this can surely be called as "Victory"
almighty says,the one who control their anger instead of bursting out loud,and don't vent it
onto anybody or anything else,rather they
get the hold of their temper calmly are more
victorious and successful than the warriors.
who fight and destroy their enemies for the sake of their god,and their dearest country are also
not as much victorious or true winner.
warrior is the person control, subsiding rage
victory thus seems quite an abstract thing.
©tuiethetweety11 1we_elude 66w
"......Few vacant chairs and gleaming eyes were spotted across the vineyard.... beholding the glimpse of 'comet' to rue the peccadilloes of their life....surrendering to the catastrophe every comet was cursed to bring ......their cardinal compass were preluding this comet as the revisitor towards the 'great flood ' ....."
But the eyes.... their eyes were still gleaming
Must be of the awe....
There is an awe.....also at gazing at the fireball of space... to celebrate the victorious fall of the 'falling star'.... to behold its final journey across space. It won't disappoint you even if your wish is not reverberated from this cosmic 'crash' .....
A peek into fifteenth century (earth was flat...back then..)
But now in this century you can set a reminder on your phone to get awestruck by any comet ( earth is not flat anymore) And you don't have be worried of it's earliest comprehension as oblivious disaster.
But disasters is still the constant visitor ...and It turned out to be that its not because of any comet or star .....to be precise ...their is no accurate ' ....because of.....' for disaster or is it because we are afraid to accept the known/unknown '... because of ...' of disaster ..!!
The eerie repetition of disasters around the world is still terrifying in different ways... From thunders striking to bring rain and subsequently forming deluge to swipe off millions of lives in many countries......the cyclone of Pacific Ocean still cannot put off the Australia's forest fire ......the thunderstorm turning into tornadoes....swirling millions of life in it ......But we do seem to have disaster Management act ....wow ... which is similar as 'trying' to predict the unpredictable earthquake ......whilst the tectonics is terrifying 'seismic' souls....
With time.... the number of disaster are also exponentially emerging from nuclear explosions to electromagnetic pulse.....the new addition to the disaster management rulebook .
It may have different forms but every form of disaster....does the same ...takes life away...
Disaster is macroscopically dragging away
biotic beings continuously....tearing apart the home ...dreams ...and life of million lives ....lives just like us ...Still we have no solution....and we ...we are left to ponder......
How many victory are we looking for !!
How much do we hide behind our ENDeavours !!
Disasters are distasteful but ain't delusional
Disasters are the reality ...we can ignore the reality ....but not the consequences of it ......
So no need to panic
But concerned and informed ...surely the initial way to go....
Till then mark on your Google calendar to behold Halley's comet of 2061....
(P.S - we can't predict it accurately...as its orbit is unpredictable .... So will be our life from here to 2061....to ....)
©we_elude
Thank you so much for reading !!!
#disaster #wod #pod @mirakee #victoryc @writersbay #writersnetwork☘️
How many 'victory' are we looking for !!
How much do we hide behind our ENDeavours !!
Disasters are distasteful but ain't delusional
Disasters are the reality ...we can ignore the reality ....but not the consequences of it ......
©we_elude36 16 11-
we_elude
@thelunareclipse I am so thankful for your genuine read and feedback .
I appreciate it - thelunareclipse @we_elude You are more than welcome
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Always very welcome.
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_gk_07
It's an insightful read.....!
Penned it wonderfully with your vocab.... That makes it more radiant....! And yeah... Hope we'll see the comet in future whenever it passes by...! -
we_elude
@_gk_07 and your feedback always add more radiant to it ..thanks a lot
And that comet ...sure ..we all be hinged to it
The evils of the living
Victory
Woah so with this victory the battle finally ends...
Shouted with rejoice a naive little child who had no idea of how the world works..
No it doesn't.. Explained the mother..
Sighing deeply she said... "If only it could end with just the amount of blood that was spilled on the battlefield. "
The battle was won...
But it wasn't...
©love_your_life19 0 1daffodilpearlzz 66w
@writersnetwork @writersbay #victoryc
©daffodilpearlzz
~Bhavya Raj
Thu 25 Mar 2021.
81 45 30- daffodilpearlzz @orotund Glad to know dear
- daffodilpearlzz @orotund So shall I call you Dolly???
- oceansandgraveyards Yea, sure dear! ❤️
- oceansandgraveyards Good morning, make a good dayy!
- daffodilpearlzz @orotund Good morning Dolly
VICTORY
V aliant we are when we enter
I ndiscriminate in our demeanor
C atastrophe on land & the sea we strike
T hreatening everyone's existence alike
O minous are our names
R ambunctious attitude we possess
Y okelish assassins merciless
We are the natural disasters that befall in many shapes and forms.
But Victory is never ours.
Mother Earth's babies are ever so resilient.
They resurrect, regrow, rebuild,
revamp, revitalize, replenish.
And they move on...
they live on...
as if nothing ever can touch
their will to survive.
©trebleclef38 14 10go_win_the_hearts 66w
#victoryc
#disaster
A King waged war
taking thousands of soldiers
and a group of powerful strategoi
to bring glory and victory!
Tumultuous Battle
fought over a fortnight
from dusk to dawn in order
turning soil red in blood and gore!
Vultures and war hounds
filled bellys happily
eating flesh at night being pacified.
Whetting of swords, spears and arrows-
was heard late in the evening from camps,
where men talked of maneuvers
to taste victory at any cost!
In the stroke of battle
numerous women got widowed
and a great many became orphans.
Many drops of bawling
remained dark quite unheard!
Isn't it a disaster??
Copious lives blown out
and on the heaps of corpses cold and hard
was hoisted the Royal Standard!
©️govind_
25th March, 2021
@writersnetwork @mirakee @writersbay
Image credit to the rightful owner.A BATTLE..
©go_win_the_hearts78 40 28- go_win_the_hearts @avril__dawn ji thank you so much
- go_win_the_hearts @ak_anjali_daydreamzz ji thank you so much
- thelunareclipse It's great
- go_win_the_hearts @thelunareclipse thank you friend
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sproutedseeds 66w
#wod#disaster#mirakee#writersnetwork
#victoryc#writersbay
@writersbay@writersnetwork@mirakee
@writersnetwork thank you for the like ❤️
Thank you for the editor's choice ❤️F L O O D
You came gushing and rushing
into our home when we were sleeping
Flooding all the rooms
Floating all our furniture
Fearful were my people.
Do you think it's your victory??
Victory as "natural calamity"
a revenge on man made "atrocities."
You claimed our homes
we became homeless
You came with full will power
we became hopeless
Do you think you hit on our "ignorance"
highlighting on the your safety as importance.
You took away the trees
what will we do to breathe??
You carried away our cattle
our source of income for which we battle.
Oh dear FLOOD, your victory we embrace
We promise you to keep our Nature safe
We plead, please don't show us our grave.
©sproutedseeds
25.03.2162 21 16-
sproutedseeds
@anvaya ok. Where?
I experienced it in Surat ,Gujarat - zoya_charmz
- sproutedseeds @zoya_charmz thank you for the feedback ❤️
- anvaya In Kerala, some two or three years ago
- sproutedseeds @anvaya ok
bellemoon99 66w
Here you are again
Weighing me down
Causing so much pain
Nearing me to drown
My emotions turned to crimson rivers
I swim within them every night
Limbs wrecked by effort and shivers
Please tell me I will be alright
Finally, I get up once more
Today I write my own History
A battle you could never ignore
This is my mental health Victory!
#pod #writersbay #victoryc #mentalhealth
After three days without even being to shower, I was able to smile again. You're not alone in this battle, remember to reach out for help when you need it.Borderline personality disorder (BPD)
©bellemoon9917 0 1pallavi4 66w
Volcano eruption
Several hundred feet below the surface
I lay embroiled in my own simmering rage
Fissures around me lay dormant too
Slowly gathering momentum through the ages
After what felt like a thousand years
One day I mustered up the courage
Accumulating all the magma tears around me
Lunged upwards like a savage
With a mighty explosion in the dead of the night
I lurched from the crater- a mile high
I jumped with glee on rediscovering
The beauty of the star spangled sky
Gathering all my molten and gaseous power
Making my way through the closed vents
I’d erupted free to breathe the air again
Marvelling at my magnificent ascent
From magma fuming deep in the earth
I flowed as lava and poisonous gases
They’d long forgotten how devastating I could be
It had been ages since I was last seen by the masses
The huge eruption caused by me made the world
Come to a halting stop all of a sudden
Happy in my victory I gobbled all in my way
Easing myself all those centuries of burdens
As molten lava I flowed lustily
Meandering down the mount’s slope
Long enough to watch peoples faces of dismay
The blood draining and the loss of hope
In my grandeur I forgot all my misery
Or the fact that I’d been chained for so long
My mile high excursions were a fantastic reminder
That the earth was where I truly belonged
I was dense when I burst out of the crater
Flowing from the top of the mount
Slowly the top of me solidified
Releasing gases in great amounts
Reaching record temperatures I enjoyed
Press coverage and other attentions
Pictures of me decorated the newspapers realising
Notions about me had all been misconceptions
Fearfully the village in which I resided
Was emptied overnight and left vacant
People ran after not apprehending
That I was Satan’s own agent
Singeing the earth and all around
Melting rock, grass and debris
I lay cooling finally at ease after having
Discovering the elating joys of being free
@pallavi4
25th of March, 2021
Pic credit: Pinterest, picture credited to its rightful owner
#wod #disaster #victoryc #volcano #personification_poems #natural_disaster @writersnetwork #writerstolli #writersnetwork #mirakee #mirakeeworld #readwriteunite #thepoetrycommunity #poetry #pod #writerscommunity @mirakee.
44 15 18- pallavi4 @miss_silentlyweird thank you so much for your kind words
- miss_silentlyweird @pallavi4 Much welcome ☺️❤️
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Always very welcome.
- pallavi4 @lovesmessenger thank you so much. I’m very happy you liked it
absynth 66w
Some rhyme to the rescue...
#snowscape #noescape #personification #spectatorsofdoom #littlebylittle #disaster #wod #victoryc @writersbay
#writersofmirakee #mirakee #mirakeeRoar #pod #readwriteunite #wordporn #writersnetwork #writerscommunity #mirakeeapp #writers_paradise #writers_together #mirakeepost #mirakeefamily #mirakinity_mibe #writersunited #writersbureauS(no)w (e)scape
Rumble rumble rumble!
The avalanche is coming.
Tumble tumble tumble!
Emotions start cartwheeling.
Grumble grumble grumble!
As promises start trailing.
Trouble trouble trouble!
Forevers are crumbling.
Fumble fumble fumble!
With words that are no longer healing.
A jumble jumble jumble!
This labyrinth of feelings.
Bubbles bubbles bubbles!
Only growing bigger and never popping.
Shuffle shuffle shuffle!
Through this playlist of memories unending.
Labels labels labels!
Of the stubborn past never peeling.
Humble humble humble!
Once were this love's beginnings.
So simple simple simple!
Till expectations started barging.
Subtle subtle subtle!
Were the mixed signals hearts were receiving.
Little by little by little
The cold started encroaching.
Icicles icicles icicles!
Grew thicker with each misunderstanding.
Battles battles battles!
Where every victory was a losing.
Sweet sweet truffle!
Too frosty for the feasting.
Happy happy couple!
Too enamored to heed the warnings.
Amidst the scuffles and ruffles
Balls of hatred started snowballing.
Futile hustle bustle
As frostbite started settling.
Love in shambles shambles shambles!
And a silent spectator to disaster incoming.
Finally gobble gobble gobble!
The avalanche devoured hearts like dumplings.
©absynth41 20 13- absynth @lovethatneverfades yes they were in demand so had to manufacture some :)
- absynth @artsyy thank you so much, I'm grateful.
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Despite what was actually going on, this was such an exciting and adventurous read, due to the poetically pleasing way in which you penned it! Enjoyed to the max!
- absynth @lovenotes_from_carolyn thank you. Some sweet rhyme to swallow the bitter pill.
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Works every time!
pooja17 66w
When you are surviving
In the most unexpected
and dreadful situation
But still you came out to
Be the shining star..& a superb
Role model for everyone. .
That's truly a Victory
Which remains forever **
©pooja1760 26 19- thoughtsprocess Beautiful
- pooja17 @falak_k thank you so much
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pooja17
@dishang8614
@thoughtsprocess
thank you so much - pooja17 @odysseus thank you so much Sir for your kind read and repost
- pooja17 @_sudipta_ thank you so much for your kind read and repost
Heart laden with disasters
Hurricanes, weeping all along the way
As they unruly wreck harlequin lives all gray
Hurricane of Cynicism, spiraling with unmet expectations underway
A wrecked heart is what lies in dismay
Avalanche, skidding skittishly all along the downfall
Stifling the breathe away, as zillions of lives are left to haul
Avalanche of Trepidation,triggered by the dereliction to befall
Strangled heart is left devoid of life's enthrall
Hailstorms, grinning at the touch of the earth
'Cause they are at liberty from fear of tormenting people henceforth
Hailstorms of Vexation,frozen n longing comfort of the hearth
The hails of warmth are heavens worth
Life,confronted with a disaster, lying in wait is another
Pandemonium it seems altogether
But victorious Heart, overlooking itself despite the smothers
Cladded with tranquilties n its outcomes alike but should be affected by nuther
©haruisuzu12 0 1The trophy of victory may slip from your hands, by a fraction of a second or when luck
unfavours,
But your outstanding performance in the battle shall always be remembered and
win you a thousand hearts!
©myscribbles799 0 1_celena_ 66w
Hello heavy rain n her famous
crime partner "landslides"
Do u remember me,
We had a pleasant meeting
2 years back
I was amazed as
U gave us a visit
in the mid of may
Wondering how eager
U were to see our
devastated face
Onn our way back
The orange red sky
turned dark grey
I could see the dark clouds
Chasing us as if they were
enchanted by thou
Mountain on one side
a deep valley on the other
with a rocky muddy road
I sensed ur grinning
As u were chasing victory
over our lonely beings
We started to send
Our last messages
to our near n dear ones
Thought u allotted the wind
N ur frnd so that we can
encounter our death
For that moment I blamed u
as u crumbled my dreams
The tomorrow I was waiting for
was snatched by u in minutes
We defeated u safe n sound
But idk how many lives
were left undone by u
Ur unwelcomed visits
Leaves everyone in sorrow and regrets!
©_celena_
#disaster #wod #victoryc
#writersnetwork#writersbay
@writersnetwork @writersbayAn unwelcomed visit!
©_celena_34 8 5- rierie_simps this is how poetry works. Sad stories can be beautifully written
- _celena_ @rierie_simpss ikr
- miss_silentlyweird @_celena_ Welcome ☺️✨
- unconfessed_thoughts Damn this ❤️✨
- _celena_ @unconfessed_thoughts FYI, a true incident
soulfulstirrings 66w
victory laps on concrete coliseums
bearing torches of modernization
whilst glaciers melt
and seasons turn their back
for earth sighs
amidst sights of destruction
where humans play
harps of pandemonium
©soulfulstirrings113 45 50- eniim_allo Incredible piece ❤❤
- lovethatneverfades Where you been? Is everything alright?
- soulfulstirrings @lovethatneverfades I was just a little caught up at my end beta .. Thank you so much for asking ❤️ how are you doing ❤️
-
lovethatneverfades
Ah good to hear all's well
We had covid. Dads recovering. Infection is too High. But yeah quarantine got over Yesterday. Tired to the core. - soulfulstirrings @lovethatneverfades please take care beta .. wishing all of you a speedy recovery . Hope all is well now ❤️ give yourself time , take lots of rest and recoup ❤️
gaurangig 66w
Ma was forged from the fires of the Sun!
For ages she simmered and burned!
But Time is an angel of healing,
And with his help, she slowly turned!
Though she grew beautiful on the outside,
Adorning jewels of azure and emerald!
She had hidden deep within her
The scars of all the burns she had!
Although she looks calm to you,
Only I know how disturbed she is!
Sometimes nervous, sometimes unhappy,
It takes a lot of efforts to hide her unease!
But sometimes, she trembles, every so slightly
When she sheds a silent tear of despair,
And I emerge quietly, you don't feel me,
But on a seismograph dials you stare!
Some other times, she is a little upset
And she shakes at the thought of all that's wrong,
You feel me move you, just for milliseconds
Or you may not even notice, if you are in a throng!
But the real bad me, peeps out rarely
Only when Ma gets really really angry
Then you will see me in all my might
When Ma shakes violently, everyone is wary!
She keeps patience for a long long time
But the scars are deep and remind her
Of all her agony, she went through for her kids!
But now they use her, just don't mind her!
So like all moms, sometimes she gets mad
She unleashes me with all her power!
And I shake all of it up, animals and man,
I destroy houses and buildings and towers!
When I come to visit, Ma's expression changes
It becomes angry, her face convoluted!
She goes astray, rivers changing course
Mountains crumbling down, sea waves diverted!
Ma's wrath am I, I spare no one:
Innocent animals, birds, and plants,
I destruct everything in my path,
I disturb the balance and all the plans!
Till Ma keeps the pain deep in her heart,
I will keep returning, that's my curse
And I will take everything away,
I will always be the bearer of a hearse!
She keeps me leashed most of the times,
But like a naughty child I am,
When she is busy moping on her scars,
I escape and burst the dam!
So when I return, don't blame me
I am just your reflection
Be careful with Mother Earth
You need to give her more affection!
And over time, if you improve,
I promise you will see less of me!
For Ma loves all of you, if I stop arriving,
It would be her greatest victory!
©gaurangig
#disaster #victoryc #earthquakes #wod #mirakee #writersbay #writersnetworkMother Earth's Tremor!
But sometimes, Ma trembles, every so slightly
When she sheds a silent tear of despair,
And I emerge quietly, you don't feel me,
But on a seismograph dials you stare!
©gaurangig43 6 7- gaurangig @laveenapintoserrao thank you so much dear!! You motivate me!!
- _kaz_08_ Well written.
- gaurangig @_kaz_08_ thank you
- gaurangig @laveenapintoserrao
#victoryc
this might be considered
a waste of time
to sit still at the window
of a yellow parlor
listening her own purrs of desire:
today, she is going to steal some feathers
to hang in her hair.
her face loses its mask
in the hearts of grass
as drops of rain
fill the spaces
between the bones
she escapes
from the scars of
ring in her nose
and out of darkness
she acknowledges her shadow;
a sculpted dream
left so long
in the attic.
©desiderata_13 2Indeed
Victory is always sugary
Hardships are just a part.
©ayishaparveen30 2 5lovenotes_from_carolyn 66w
Nepenthe (pronounced nuh-pen-thee), which means "the one that chases away sorrow," is the fabled elixir that purportedly cured mental woes by way of inducing forgetfulness. Thank you for reading!
PRELUDE
Under celestine skies
I await the blessed benediction of nepenthe
The one earthly redeemer that can deliver us from untold mental anguish
But dare I really take a sip?
Dare I press this divine elixir
Upon my thirsting lip?
©Carolyn Glackin 3/25/2021
NEPENTHE
by Carolyn Glackin
Tell me please, nepenthe
Are you a blessing or a curse?
And if I should imbibe you
Will I be better, or much worse?
Praytell, how can I find you?
For you are not here in my grips
Are you off gifting your elixir
To some other willing lips?
Oh dearest, don't ignore me
Can't you see that I'm in need?
With just one precious taste of you
From haunting memories, I'm freed!
Arise with me, dark lover
For very soon, I think you'll see
That the two of us together
Always leads to victory!
You're my healer and my hero
And never do you fail me
For you steal me from the wickedry
Which so often doth assail me
Nepenthe, don't be cruel
Oh you beguile and you bewitch
And then when I need you most
You leave me high and dry like this?
Come! Let me consume you!
Let me absorb you deep within
For then the healing process
Can finally begin
I shall forever sing your praises
Oh so divine, your benediction!
My dear, I crave you like a drug
Won't you please grant me a prescription?
Just one final time I'll ask
As I await you fervently
I'm swooning for you, love
Seek me out, sweet nepenthe!
Copyright Carolyn Glackin 3/25/2021
Art credit: Richard R Young Art.
*Submitting for the #nepenthec and #victoryc challenges.
#personification #writersbay #writersnetwork #mirakee #challengepiece.
186 144 84- asjthewriter Woah! What a concept. And brilliantly portrayed.. Bravo!
-
lovenotes_from_carolyn
@ajthewriter_ Thank you so much AJ!! I had fun penning this one for the nepenthe and victory challenges that day. Had to revise several times to make it work, but learned a lot in the process. Most importantly, the correct pronunciation of "nepenthe," which as it turns out, I'd been wrong about for years.
Everybody who visits this post gets a complimentary cup of the exotic elixir. Here comes yours. - asjthewriter Yeeeeaaaahhh!
- muskaanbhatt
- lovenotes_from_carolyn @muskaanbhatt Thank you very much for the kind reads and reposts, I appreciate it!