How do I unfold the part of me that doesn't exist anymore?
I lie down in bed hoping she would join me and make me whole. I wake up with fresh eyes but a vacant soul. I do not know who I am supposed to be anymore but the mirror tells me to put on my lipstick and smile,
to wait for the phase to pass and watch myself come alive.
© Sweedle
#unfoldc
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sweedle 48w
I try my best to put my head and hands in one place and write for you all, I hope it was worth the wait.
#sweedledsouza #pod #unfoldc #depression #poetry #poem #repost #rwu #writersbay #writersnetwork #mirakee #mentalhealth #mentalhealthmatters #sadness #sadpoem @writersbay @writersnetwork @mirakee #ceesreposts16 3 4- lovenotes_from_carolyn Heartfelt, candid, and very well written/expressed!
- sweedle @lovenotes_from_carolyn thank you so much
- lovenotes_from_carolyn More than welcome.
aqstar 50w
Pehli baar WB ka prompt try kiya
Sorry, I can't write,... (╥﹏╥)
@childauthor_345 aap pr likha hai
#youarec #unfoldc
op xd... My 60th post...!
28/may/2021You are the poet
who unfold the
folded poetries
and drift them up
the sky,
which then gather
and fall on people
as a ray
of hope.
-Aqsa156 126 65-
aqstar
@shadowofthoughts_ ahh... Wow.. ! Both are my Fav too...!
Mine is Sylvia Plath... - shadowofthoughts_ @aqstar she's amazing.
- aqstar @shadowofthoughts_ she's truly amazing...! Read her.. Huh..!
- shadowofthoughts_ @aqstar I've not read much.. but few popular wale xD but now you mentioned I'll make sure to read more
- aqstar @shadowofthoughts_ A-ha...! ♡
spitfire_ 51w
Even tears have to leave
somewhere someday somenight
Unfolding a path
to a happy place
to a sad place
to nowhere
as a nomad
©spitfire_8 3wilmaneels1 51w
You shouldn't be stressed about things you have no control over
They tend to unfold in ways we never expected
In times where change are like breathing
What would it benefit to worry beforehand
It just takes away the joy of this moment
We tend to overthink ourselves into unhappiness
Even while we're celebrating
Because we feel we don't deserve anything else but unhappiness
The Master thought we deserved all the happiness in the world
I think it's time we allow ourselves that
Even if just in this moment
©wilmaneels1
©2605202118 4 4- wilmaneels1 Thank you for the pop in and repost @sanjay_kumr
- anautumnleaf Yeah true.
- writersbay True.
- wilmaneels1 Thank you @anautumnleaf
love_whispererr 51w
When you unfold my balladries with some miseries and with many larkspurs
I'm a bare pansy
neither from the hibernation of summer
nor from the cradle of vapourish September
an unnoticed metaphor I'm
dangling from the essence of an old letter
give me and undone sonnet of heartache
I'll unbutton its soul and decorate it
with my vagrant petals of winter.
I'm an unremembered fairytale
neither from the castle of German's Rapunzel
nor from the trepidation of Hansel and Gretel
and unhinged album I'm
embellished by the breezes of spring
where the ewe dances with some lambs
under the street lamps of a sheepfold
and behemoths are killed by that brave ram.
You're the cold lumberjack
from the fanciest citadel of my pocketbook
and from the mahogany colors of my corsage
but a naked lie you're
squawking with the melody of my metaphors
where I pierce many prickles on my heart
to undress my nights inside a tavern
and inscribe some sonnets for my empty wardrobe.
ʖ͡° bidya ༎ a rookie208 58 77-
i_akshit_bhardwaj
@love_whispererr great work bruh !!!
I am looking for short content writers on my ig page @mending_words to post such thoughts, poems , contents
please follow - preetkanwal Excellent metaphors; congratulations on WNrepost 💐💐💐❤️❤️❤️
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dishang8614
Extremely beautiful! Your metaphors are incredibly captivating ❤❤❤
Congratulations dear! -
san_wordzz
How shall I praise this piece
Gosh the descriptions are wowww ❤
The 1st stanza
Bare pansy uff uff❤
Specially loved the German Rapunzel wala part❤
This is a freaking masterpiece ❤ - _transient Excellent! Wow! ❣️
absynth 51w
#limerence #lemontree #bookofnature #tangytunes #imagery #wod #unfoldc #writersbay
#writersofmirakee #mirakee #mirakeeRoar #pod #readwriteunite #wordporn #writersnetwork #writerscommunity #mirakeeapp #writers_paradise #writers_together #mirakeepost #mirakeefamily #mirakinity_mibe #writersunited #writersbureaulime-rence
When ideas don't stick
And rhyme isn't slick
The lemons growing in my back yard
Whistle tangy tunes like bards
Spurring me on to write a limerick.
The sight of fresh grass
Sunkissed till its the color of brass
Mingles with the dusty whiffs
And tickles with every sniff
As I wait for the sultry heat to pass.
Nature becomes the book of reference
And poetry unfolds like fragrance
Into the lungs of my words
Amidst the chirping of birds.
Long live this limerence.
©absynth35 14 15- absynth @hiesenberg thank you. That's a great geeky name btw. :)
- forestborn @absynth hahaaa Everyone says so✌
- dusky_dawn I can tag wn on all your posts
- dusky_dawn This has my heart ❤
-
inner_conflict
Limerence!!.. I have written something with the same title, weeks before!!.
Good one
sou_scribbles_ 51w
And who would have ever imagined, that after all these years of being best friends, Love would unfold its wings and make its presence felt....over a plate of chocolate momo???
©sou_scribbles_14 2 1Unfold
Last night while,
Lying on my bed,
I unfolded memories,
Memories so sore,
That made me weak,
Memories so grim,
That made me strong,
And then I thought,
How I cope with all,
When with myself,
I was at a war,
Where,
I was the loser,
And,
I was the winner,
And,
as I unfolded further,
I revised lesson,
That I learnt,
We have to fight our own wars,
We are the one wounded,
We are the one healed,
And,
I said to myself,
Go to sleep darling!
No one can hurt you now,
As, You are the queen,
Of your own kingdom now.
The dark night is over,
And the glorious morning,
The beautiful life,
Is waiting for you!
©sadafiqbal22 4 6- writersbay Beautiful.
- sadafiqbal @writersbay Thankx a lot
- writeforjoy Very optimistic
- sadafiqbal @writeforjoy Thankx a lot
My pain smell so balsamic and I don't wanted to unfold the intoxicating hate in my heart that will lead my soul rotten.
©miss_silentlyweirdPhoto By Giovanni Calia on Unsplash67 27 22- themoonandthesun Woah indeed!!!
- miss_silentlyweird @revathychandrasekhar Ayee thank you so much
-
miss_silentlyweird
@themoonandthesun It's okay dear, thank you so much
Have good time ahead ☺️ - dishang8614 Beautiful indeed!❤❤❤
- miss_silentlyweird @dishang8614 Thank you po❤️❤️
zoya_charmz 51w
Dear Jels,
I wonder how majestically you could cast your magic spell singing lullaby of love affairs. The skies above melt its bluish shades and you appeared to me like an angel drizzling the fluorescence of air. You grew daffodils in my heart, planted purple pansies to wrap my scars. You unfolded the origami of your magical charms and I merrily breathed the season full of white lilacs. Your dreamy lips shape an archaic vein that croons the seraphic tunes in vanilla swathe. Your skin smells the essence of the mountains and your braided hair garnishes the pristine landscape. I fall for every shade of your beauty, I breathe the same air of your drenching seasons of purity.
In the midst of the autumn rains, you sit quietly in that antique library to meet your lover, to kiss him with your artistic adjectives and I stitch patterns of John Donne's metaphors to spray you the celestial essence of arts and tempting imagery. You're the breathing Cinderella blooming amidst the chimneys spreading the chamomile essence of blue seas.
You're the .
You're the ℎ ℎ.
I smell the tranquil essence in your presence,
I adore you beyond heavens.
If I were to gift you something, I would gift you the paradise of love poetry.
Take all my love ♡
Yours ever (◍•ᴗ•◍)
________________________________________________
[ Yes, you're right. Our thoughts match, we match in many ways, we both love various versions of love adoring turquoise colours. You remember the turquoise blue colour that you used to put in your Bg, the marvellous views of countryside, yeah we both adore that beauty brimming summer snowflakes, we both adore the classic aura of the literature where old romance tales inhaled bruising stars and exhaled moon rays. We both cry reading love stories, hey are you my clown? ]
I just tried to portray these in this love letter
Thanking God for gifting me you. Words aren't enough to describe our bond, just wanna say that I found a soul sister in you. You are the sweetest and coolest person in mirakee.
Happy Birthday Again Love ♡
I want you to stay safe and happy.
God's every blessing be upon you.
@fairytales_
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#imagery #unfoldc
@theinkdomain I breathe you❤️.
81 65 28- writersbay @fairytales_ Belated happy birthday. 🌼
- fairytales_ Thank you so much dear❤❤ @the_muted_voice
-
fairytales_
@saloni_04
Thank you so much dear ❤❤ -
fairytales_
@writersbay
Thank you so much WB❤ -
fairytales_
I adore you, Miss doctor.
This love letter is precious to me I will keep it with me forever
With each passing minute
Secrets slowly unfold
The ones buried inside
Which ever weren't told
Some cause happiness
Leading to a smile
Some cause sadness
Tears leak from the eye.
©maanvi_bhagat9 2loves_passion 51w
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21 5 3- go_win_the_hearts Too good
- aqstar Beautiful ❤❤❤
- loves_passion @go_win_the_hearts @im_the_star_of_my_life thanks
- writersbay Wow.
- loves_passion @writersbay thanks
...
Dark skies hide
half baked dreams
and my shattered tears ;
it awaits me to unfold
the tears and bake
the rest.15 2 2When minds are full of fear
gaze gaze you o’ dear
how night opens it’s heart,
unfolding secrets of universe
tumbling out are galaxies of stars.
Plunging in its pulchritude
let’s embrace our scars,
with our inner spark.
let’s make a wish to
illumine our mind’s corners dark .
©preetkanwal26.05.202152 21 21- lovenotes_from_carolyn Very welcome always.
- sahnah Awesome piece dr♥️♥️
- preetkanwal Thank you so much friend @sahnah🙏
- love_whispererr Awesomeness overloaded
- preetkanwal Many thanks @love_whispererr🙏
say_me_krish 51w
A Cinquain poem with syllable count 2-4-6-8-2 :)
@writersnetwork (71, 13) #imagery #unfoldc.
108 37 44- anush18 Damnn
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_aradhya
Aha, this was so nice.
The alliteration caught my attention❤️ -
san_wordzz
Hey, I feel very embarrassed for not being able to participate in such a stupendous challenge. But I was so boggled up with College assignments and practical that I had to take a break.
I'll surely try to be a part of the challenges in the upcoming times.
So sorry for this time -
say_me_krish
@san_wordzz
Hehe, you need not be sorry about that, okay? :")
It's totally fine, your studies matter more, obviously - san_wordzz @say_me_krish Thank you for being so sweet and humble❤
smile_its_sunnah 51w
~Quote the day with self-reflection~
There are Billions of people in this world, but only a few will gain your absolute trust. Don't ever let them go, respect and treasure them as if they are a diamond found in the mines of scarcity.
#smilesquotes
#unfoldc #writersbay @writersbay
Pic credited to its rightful ownerDon't be afraid to unfold
your hearts secrets,
just be careful of the
person you unfolding too.
©smile_its_sunnah24 3 6UNFOLD
Unfold the skills of writing
calligraphed into verses
personifying the feelings
with healthy thoughts
and a clear mind
rhyming melodious words
in a rhythmic pattern
bringing out the emotions.
©sproutedseeds
26.05.2138 16 17- preetkanwal Well penned ❤️
- clichepenname Nicely done.
-
sproutedseeds
@love_whispererr@crogers180
@preetkanwal
Thank you so much for the appreciation ❤️❤️❤️ - sproutedseeds @writersbay thank you for the kind feedback ❤️
- sproutedseeds @clichepenname thank you so much ❤️
aditii_ 51w
The windowsills
sit near me
the chirping of birds
from a branch tree
the sweet melodies
get stuck on a sticky note
which is 'bout to flow
through nudging winds
pale daises which
hang on the front door
can feel the echoes of bushes
the dull odour I can smell
from that old book shelf
often pulls me
sometimes sitting beneath
the unfolded bits of poetry
smell like the skies
those tackling of
foot on the floor
embraces me with the embroidered pieces
of rose petals
the sugary aroma of
mango tastes as a fairy
singing folklores
the perals of dew drops
under the leaf spreads
the aroma of clear clouds
essence of each lavender in the
winter embrace
wears a muffler
of every essence.
©aditii_
I don't know if it's something. Maybe I am not good at imageries xd.
#imagery #unfoldc #wod/every summer sleeps in the flower bed of spring breeze/
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laus_deo
The imagery is damn beautiful !
Bg lines ♡ - sereiin ♥️♥️
- _inferno It's b'ful ♥️♥️
-
aditii_
@asteroidxae ❤️
@wailingmage962 I missed you too love!❤️
@rani_shri Thank you so much di!
@afrah_ thank you so much afrah! - writers_ink_ Wow beautiful
bubbly_bluebells 51w
#imagery
#unfoldc
Thank you dear Mirakee for EC❤
___________________________________________
If decision making is a candle
Thoughts will have an enchanment
Like Aroma of Queen of the nights
romanticising the environment
If based on vague illusions,
poison of heads
Then pungent odour would fume
Like burning morgues in cementary
Urging to disappear from here
If words can secret sebum
Termed important to be obedient
Then obscured alleys would appear
Either as wrong diversion
Where eerie smoke of leather tanning factories
Covers the sky
Or third eye would have been swinging
In zephyr of lavender fields,
refreshing among mints green
To lead and applauding truth in silence
Because those who don't have(form)
Personal formic acid to trace & guide
Sub-concious smells like rotting trash
Attracts to dumped side of the road
Over which flies,astray dogs feast and kick
At every pitch evility knocks head
Soul cries in dungeons to get busy
in an authentic account,make ointments
Unfold the chaotic patterns to reorganize
Them Into pavilion blooms
Being mad about it save myself!
All sufferings are foul smell of
Unexpressed emotions
Not weaved in right manner
Nor placed in right position
Life is a series of cultivating feelings
Someday it ripes as fresh mangoes season
Other days turns into valley of tulips
Who doesn't do it is a living corpse
With choked respiratory system
Burned own field of wheat harvests
Now obstruct kind breaths from its stench
And Unpleasantness don't waana see
anyone happy,above them
Demean & look everyone from
humiliating eyesImagery
©dream_dragon54 9 14- kosachaya Congratulations on editors choice ❤️
-
bubbly_bluebells
Thank you so much mam❤ @kosachaya
Your appreciation matters a lot - miss_silentlyweird Gosh so elegant ✨
- writersbay Amazing.
- bubbly_bluebells Thank you so much ❤❤ @miss_silentlyweird @writersbay
sumana_chakraborty 51w
#pod#wod#imagery#mirakee#writersnetwork#unfoldc@writersbay#drizzlec@mirakee@writersnetwork
When soul's dissonance
knows no bounds
Brine of crestfallen sighs dry in orbs
Sorrows stretch like Kalahari desert
Billowing waves of dolour
in whirlpool of cyclonic storms
Restlessness cast
its dark patch of umbra
to grasp the pharynx
Descend down
O Lord
As a respite
Drizzle thy raindrops of love
from heart's haven
O God,
No, not once again
Test my tolerance
I'm unable to bear this pain
Unfold , O lord thy divine hands
Unfold and shower thy elysian blessings
Unto your minuscule creatures.
My senses are numb today
Uplift this physical entity of mine
Divert them into thy spiritual trajectory.
©sumana_chakraborty©sumana_chakraborty(read the caption pls)
52 34 33- forestborn Wow
- sumana_chakraborty @rabindrasoni Thank you
- sumana_chakraborty @hiesenberg thank you
- lovenotes_from_carolyn So outstandingly woven!