To the growing pains penetrating your skin, I hope they will leave you. No, not leave you unhurt. I hope that after all the pain, they will leave a mark. A scar that will remind you the lesson of not getting burnt. Chasing fire may burn us, and that's just what you did. But chasing is part of life; and you will never know how much it hurts getting burned if you never set yourself on fire.
To all the varying weights and loads you are carrying, I hope they will leave you. No, not leave you not exhausted. I hope that after all those sighs and wiping, they will leave you some sweats. Those will remind you the tiredness you had along the way. The journey is hard, we all know that and getting tired is part of it. Rest if you may, but never give up.
You see, life is not always about the butterflies and tranquility. Life is about surviving. Life is about thriving to get to your destination. But know that death is not our destination, alright? Death is just an aftermath, where we will lay our heads to rest. Life is about trying and failing but never giving up. You are one of the most courageous. Gorgeous, too, for all your flaws and scars. One of the strongest, if I may say, keep trying. Rest, then keep going.
Stop fighting for someone, who doesn't care about you. They don't need you. They don't need your help. Don't become a tragedy to yourself. Live for yourself. Then live for others. Quote by Amit Santra aka @believethat_1997
shrihari_nandiniOmg how well you have written this! Great skills I must say and a very nice message too All I wish to say is that a being is eternal and that's his true personality, everything else changes but the Atma is undecaying, a person who knows this stays at peace forever! Everything is achieved by him for he has no fear at all. Your write-up is a great portrayal of an ambitious mind that hungers madly for what he wants and strives hard till he achieves his goal. Another Awesome Poetry! Keep Writing! Jaya ShriHari!
manuhereGlad you loved .Thank you. and yes you have a valid point bht to keep your sanity all the way through is sometimes difficult .The world.dosen't work that way.however one should thrive to learn how to keep the inner peace intact ,but since that wasn't the theme ,didn't included it here.God bless @shrihari_nandini
shrihari_nandini@manuhere Yes I knew the gist of your poem, hence it's very well! Of course right, I am saying this but even I can relate to this poem, for even I am an ordinary person, what I was speaking of were persons of great intellect with their minds in control ☺ We say that it's the way of world but not to forget that we constitute that very world. Yes I agree to your point that we have to be ruthless, all I wished to say was that though being ruthless is our way to tackle the problem, it is not the only way ☺ this is so for our mind is not strong enough to bear all the pain the world gives, hence we have to strike back to keep ourselves intact. That's my point, hence your poem is absolutely correct according to how the modern man is and how he has to live in order to survive the battles of World. Jaya ShriHari! ShriHari bless you! ☺♥
manuhereOkay enough cardio for your fingers (or thumb,whatever you type with). Noble thoughts