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  • uttkarsh_15 11w

    There Maybe Another part of this (No Joke around Or 4 knocks more)
    #dark #horror #story #supernatural #paranormal #suspense #thriller

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    The Horror Joke (Continuation)

    ....(Period)
    The night it all happened was nothing more than a normal night.But next day we planned to watch the movie "Paranormal Activity" latenight and decided to just go directly to sleep after that.After watching the movie,I made by bed ready in the lobby as I'm the only one who sleeps in the lobby.And that night I had a deep and sweet sleep. But in the morning,when Me ,My cousin and My sister were playing carrom together. My cousin started sharing last night Experiences which were really hard to believe.
    He told that while he was sleeping,He felt like someone was pulling his sheets which he took over his body, after some time he felt like someone had swayed his leg in the air and was pulling harder .
    Then he told me one more thing -:"Bhaiyya , I know you knocked 4 times on the door to make me scared, Hai na ? And I angrily bursted on him and said - "Abbe Bakwaas na Kar, Yesterday night I was in such a deep and sweet sleep that even i hadn't woke up from my bed once ; And one more thing.... I'm not a crazy person who will stretch a silly prank for so long ,I agree that All that I told you was just Made up by me....But for the rest case I don't know a thing."
    Then he even got more scared and was just repeating that You have done such things. It all seemed like a joke my cousin maybe playing with me until i heard my Sister.
    She told Me -"Bhaiiya Last night When I can't sleep ; In the cool breeze of AC ....I felt a Hot gust of wind touching My face and playing with my hair.And it felt like someone breathing on my face, but it was nothing like a human breathing ......And I was Awake all night, And I'm damn sure that I can't see a living soul around me At that time.At that time I was speechless and too afraid as hell.
    ...
    I remember some 4 or 5 years back when We shifted in our newly made house. I was having way too scary experiences than those 2 were having.
    At night ,I could feel someone's presence but i Couldn't see anyone around.I could hear a lot of strange sounds ,But never dared to react to them at all Neither I could understand a thing.
    And 4 knocks was one of those incidents that lasted and thrilled my soul for least 2 or 3 years.But I thought it all has come to an end back then.
    ...
    But I didn't knew it was Holding something strange and dark for me in the future To give me a call ....Or Maybe mistakenly I made one

  • uttkarsh_15 11w

    A Little Background -
    My cousin was having a month long vacation in school .So he came to our house to spend his holidays well. Mostly I use my phone a lot at Midnight time .Because of which my mom scolds me a lot. Consequently, My mother told my cousin to check on Me at midnights that I'm using my phone or not....And that too when he feels Like and Not unnecessarily.
    ...
    'The Lobby Scene ' Details -:
    In half portion of the Lobby there's An Led Attached to the wall .At the left side There is the sofa,the table in the middle And On the Right side A Single Bed . And In the other Half where the main Door connects..... There's a Fridge ,kitchen And The Sink With A long Rectangular Mirror.Usually The Lobby has 3 Bulbs And A tubelight . But for the Time Being in The story Only One Bulb Is On .
    (Just Imagine It This Way...)

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    PS - Don't think The writer's a crack mind. it's a Semi-fiction .
    #dark #horror #story #paranormal #supernatural #suspense #thriller

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    The Horror Joke

    I was moving to and fro in the lobby with some random thoughts crushing in my mind.
    All of a sudden, I felt thirst and then I took A Glass from the kitchen,filled it half from the RO and as I Was Moving forward ....i stopped in the front of the mirror which is above the sink . I sipped the water slowly from the glass,And I was Checking myself in the mirror too. Then I felt I'm not Alone Here .Then I saw Someone peeking from the door which was at the end of the lobby and that side of the lobby was totally dark. Ohh! It was my cousin who came to spy on me and irritate me, I realised .Then I planned in my mind to play an prank(kinda joke ) on him. I slowly walked towards him..... Holding The glass of water such as It was A Long candle firmly And When I was in front of him with an unusual Scary smile. Then he asked me...
    Cousin -: "Bhaiyya, what were you doing standing there with a water glass in front of that damn mirror."
    Then I replied to him-:" You'll not know a thing,Huh.... I'm conjuring Bloody Mary !"
    Then He said to me -: "Don't make a Fool of me , I know it's done with a candle and that too at 12 :30 am".
    Then I made An angry and irritated face and said -:"Do you Know some logic about the process even? or you just believe the rumours.? And see the time is 12:35 and that too 5 mins. Late because you're messing with me" ....I said Nodding my head in disappointment.
    He said -:" So will you tell me the logic ,big brother?"
    Then I answered him in a serious tone "As the mirror shows the reflection of our world,Its also capable of opening the door to the other world. It's like as We can see through the mirror, Someone from the other side may too be Looking at us ....waiting for us to open the doors of the more strange,dark and maybe evil world.
    As such the water too shows the reflection, It can act like a Stephanie in the process with the double chance of conjuring something Or even someone from the other side. Maybe it help us to conjure someone which is More demonic than the Bloody mary itself.
    ...
    And thanks to the devil....I needed a partner and here you are "
    Listening to this theory he was scared as hell...He was sweating all over and was having an expressionless face. Then he ran towards the bathroom and just stayed there for some minutes.Then I thought to level up this horror prank thing. I turned off the single bulb glowing in the lobby.Now only the dim bathroom lights were visible. When he came out , I told him in a few words that....
    "By leaving this ritual, you're not doing something wise. You'll suffer for this,And I'll not make you suffer this,As I'm just giving a cautionary warning brother ; The one who'll make you suffer is even beyond my reach and communication. so be ready for the consequences ." Then he was scared so much that he said with a little face -"Please don't say like this brother ." and than he just ran towards the room ,closed the door hard ....And my silly prank was a success....lol.
    And now I thought he'll not irritate me at midnights disturbing my vibes.
    But what happened later .....was not something I expected and not even funny .
    ....(Period)
    Next part....

  • uttkarsh_15 11w

    The Horror Joke

    Just Next Post !

  • uttkarsh_15 12w

    The Doll, The Teddy, The Thing and The Night Wanderer
    Chapter 1 (The Doll)
    .........................................................................................
    Intro -:
    For the Kids, A doll means a Lot !
    They play with them,share feelings with them,and even sleep with them . But when they grow up, They're supposed to break that relation with the doll
    ..... The one Who chooses not to ,Are thought to be the bad cases. But when the doll Chooses not to do so ..... It's worse .
    ....
    Me and my sister had experienced a lot similiar to this. So I should better start with the latest Incident first

    Latest Incident (Dated Some days ago) -:

    My nani's house is just 2 streets away , and there I have 3 Cousin sisters . Eldest one is 16 y/o ,Middle one is 13 y/o ,And the youngest one is just 4 y/o.And My real Sister's doll (Juju) with whom she used to play in her childhood usually remains At Nani's house as my Youngest cousin sis plays with her . Just a few days ago, Me and my sister were at that place, Sitting on the bed talking to each other about the School, IG , Punjabi songs And other stuff . After a time ,The youngest cousin dropped the doll on the bed , And started playing with her . I said to the middle cousin
    That "The doll seemed a little sad ,when she was laying on The bed.But when the youngest Started playing with her she seemed happy. I don't know if I'm imagining or it really seems to Everyone who notices this" . The middle one said "That's true,when I was a child , I too used to play with alike dolls for hours,And it felt like the dolls reacted to each and every talk and the things...Just like she was a Living Friend".
    ...(Period)
    Just next day....
    The youngest cousin hitted our door In the morning with my uncle .I was just in a half awake state ....
    I remember seeing her carrying the doll in her arms and approaching me .The Youngest Cousin came closer to me and said "The doll wanted to come here , She wanted to stay with you here"....
    And I was totally shocked hearing this !!
    ...........
    My sister's Experience (Somewhere in 2013 or 2014)
    It was a complete midnight situation.My sister Was just 7 at that time .So she used to sleep with the same doll (Juju) on the cornerside of the bed.So she was facing towards her doll which was sleeping left to her. She closed her eyes watching the same doll, After a little while when she opened her eyes ,she could not see her doll sleeping next to her , All she can see was just wall. Her body was totally paralyzed,Like she can't move an inch of her body as she can only see the wall and nothing.After a while she was back to the normal state ,Then she turned her eyes to the roof .There she saw something unnatural ...She saw a lot of dolls on the Ceiling, joining hands ,making a circle and they all were staring my sister.But she was astonished more to see that her own doll was not there .And instead of the ceiling fan, In the area between the circle , She could see the darker portal thing which was very shady and hard to identify. Next morning, she was glad to see her doll back and hugged her and everything was back to normal .
    (After hearing that I was having my own thoughts,I imagined maybe they all were trying to open the doors to another world,maybe My sister's doll was doing so because in the whole process she wasn't one of the dolls and doesn't appeared in front of her,And maybe it was all in my head)
    ......
    The last incident (Dated somewhere 2 or 3 years ago)
    We had a cradle which belonged to my younger sister when she was a kid. But now as we were having a younger kid (At my Nani's house ,that same 4 y/o cousin was just some months old) we decided to hand it over to her.But the cradle never stayed at the same place .Sometimes ..my Cousin travels to our house sitting in the cradle and leaved the house sleeping in her father's arms .So one day my sister was holding the doll In a silly manner,and we were delivering the cradle and the doll both to my Nani's house. On the way Many people Talked a lot weird things about them Such as ...(The women is so heartless that she handed her little baby to her younger sister and is being careless ,Why they are not placing the little baby in the cradle ...So silly they are". i think they said such things as the doll appeared very close to reality such as it was a reborn doll(Reborn dolls are the dolls which looks total real and are custom made),But our one was a total normal one.
    I don't know why but after hearing this, I was disturbed.
    ......
    The Ending - I personally think there's nothing wrong in having a little sweet connection with the doll at any age, But only when we keep in our mind the Difference between the reality and the illusionary world. Because when you start ignoring the difference,It gives her the chance to erase the difference Completely.And if that happens, Your life may turn dark and depressive...you may be left alone and declared a psychopath by the rest of the world and your life may come to a pointless Still.
    .....( Darker Narrative continues )
    Then she'll only play with you, She'll only talk to you, She'll sleep with you every night without you knowing the fact...
    Finally , she'll have total control over your LIFE and Your SOUL......||
    ___________________________________________________
    The Narrative style is inspired from The Lore S1 (Horror Web Series)

    Credits -: The reborn doll reference is from The Lore S1E6.

    Special Credits - I want to thank my sister and my mom For telling me the stories,
    And a sincere apology for Over -dramatising the stories too....
    P.S.- The writer's not a crack mind , It's just semi fiction (Half fiction,Half reality)
    #horror #deep #dark #disturbing #tale #story #supernatural #paranornmal #psychological #suspense #thriller #pod #mirakee @miraquill @writersnetwork #writersnetwork

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    The Doll

    ©uttkarsh_15

  • uttkarsh_15 13w

    Its about the doll whom the child loves but abandon it once they grow up,But the doll Doesn't...
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    It will not be a Linear story, But in a narrative form form as a collection of events ...(Trying Something New)
    #dark #horror #suspense #thriller #story #series #paranormal #supernatural

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    The Doll, The Teddy, The Thing And The Night Wanderer

    Chapter 1(The Doll) Just Next Post !

  • uttkarsh_15 13w

    Just a self realising Cautionary tale ��
    #short #story #co_mic #stellar #past #deep #time #paradox #silly #mystery #suspense

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    Look_In_to The Past
    (T. P.)


    *Somewhere In the Future *
    *Me Entering the Astrologer's Room*
    Astrologer - Welcome there , Come Sit .
    Me - Thanks !!!! (Sits Calmy)
    Astrologer - So what do you wanna know...The future ....?
    Me - No,I trust MY Karma . Just wanna Peek Into The Past !
    Astrologer- Ohh, You wanna Unveil The Memories From the Past Diaries .
    ME- Yeah Exactly ! Just wanna Uncover A Forgotten Truth .
    Astrologer - Ok Then, Close Your Eyes And Place your Hands On the Crystal Ball
    ....( I've done the same)
    Astrologer - Now You're where you want yourself to Be ....Enjoy the Ride ....But be careful once you Stare yourself for a long time ;Break The connection Or you'll be In big trouble
    Me - Ok !
    Me - I can see Somebody ,But it's too Unclear !
    Astrologer - Chanting Some Mantras....
    Me - I can see Some Idiot Who's holding an Phone !
    Astrologer - Chanting Matras for straight 30 Mins ...!
    Me - Yeah The vision is Now Getting A lot clear, And that Idiot Is recklessly Using His phone !!!
    Astrologer - Now You can see Him Clearly !
    Me - Oh That's Me
    * Me getting Knocked Down There *

  • uttkarsh_15 14w

    Reversed Legs

    Just next post ......!

  • uttkarsh_15 14w

    The Original Tale I heard From Nanaji.

    P.S.-
    "This is an story which occured in 1950's or 1960's ,when nanaji was nearly the same age as me "
    #horror #suspense #thriller #story #real #kisse

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    Reversed Legs

    Atmosphere of the story :-
    "It was a Midnight situation nearly 12 o' clock or more,The streets were as silent as the quite jungle As All you can hear are the crickets ,the wind and your own footsteps "

    Story -:
    My nanaji and his friend was walking home late night with his friend after watching a late night movie show .They reached the bridge which is connected to the railways.
    The Streetlights there were flickering , As usual . When they crossed the bridge they saw a lady in a white attire ,Which was not usual back in those days at that time . She walked towards them both and she asked about directions And it was total normal situation until.... .
    Ok, So my Nanaji Started guiding her as he knew the whole area . His friend was just looking around the place .But when he started looking down, He was not moving even an inch of his body after that ,He was just like got shocked so bad .My nanaji doesn't noticed it for the moment. But when he looked upon him,He was totally Astonished to see him like this. Then my Nanaji too look upon the earth as he Can see then the Lady's feet were Reversed (Ulte Pair or Putthpairi in punjabi).
    He got in a sudden void for some minutes as he can't think of anything like that, And even in that Time of the day .What happened next was more unexpected than the before events....
    When he moved his eyes to check on his friend he was gone (Like he can't find a living soul in that direction),And it was such a long road so with no hideouts so how he can get Disapeared . A little after he Moved his face to check on the lady But She .....
    .......
    Walked away in the opposite direction.
    (Maybe to ask someone else, Or Waiting someone to look upon her feet and look straight into her eyes so she can......)
    .....(Period)
    Afterwards he started walking towards the direction of his home With the thoughts of the unexplained Events.
    As he was walking he heard someone Else's footsteps , He didn't looked behind as he thought if anyone had to call me He will then.Then the same happened .....Anyone called by his name . But he was smart as he didn't reply to the question and just took a quick look behind as there was no one there . After a while he reached home and was laying on his bed .
    He couldn't sleep As the whole thing was revolving around his mind like the Nightmare with the unanswered questions like Where his friend was gone ,Or who was the lady And were the footsteps and the voice calling His hallucination , The Demon's call Or his Friend's Help Call.......
    .....
    After the Night he Went to his Friend's home, He talked to one his kin and asked about his friend , And then they took him to the room where his friend Was On the Manja/Khatiya(The Bed made of ropes and wood)
    As he was Very Sick with the High temperature Health , Thst he cant talk or even can't sit on his own . Then the kin Herself asked my nanaji What happened Yesterday night . Then he told her Even he don't know what Happened yesterday as he just left .
    (As he can't tell such things to her )
    .
    But some Questions Still remains As what happened to his friend , Where he was gone for a while , What was the voice calling from behind My nanaji's Back , Who was the lady,
    And the Friend recovered or not.
    ....
    Because the story itself left the World with my nanaji |
    ©uttkarsh_15

  • uttkarsh_15 15w

    It may seem just a Memento , But for the fans It's the Shining's Heart.
    Also
    Yeah I know I'm 3 days late,But it's never too late for the Overlook Party ��,
    ...
    "Sometimes human places create inhuman monsters " -Stephen King
    "This inhuman Place makes human monsters"
    - Also By Stephen King
    But my favourite One is ....
    .
    "Monsters are real ,And ghosts are too.They Live inside of us And Sometimes they win ."
    Really What A great Writer he is ��
    #horror #stephenking #books #suspense #thriller #story

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    Happy 100th Overlook Hotel Party

    July 4th Ball
    1921

  • uttkarsh_15 15w

    It happened just a day before The Dark Night!!!
    .
    Firstly The electricity cut happened . everybody reacted normal and the electricity was back soon.
    .....
    The electricity cut happened again, And i don't wanna take risks of e. cuts and inverter failures.
    So i picked up my single bed mattress,The sheets,pillow and a teddy and have gone straight to my terrace to sleep ��.
    (Yeah you heard it right,A teddy ��)
    Then i arranged my bed on the cemented floor .
    I'll tell you the environment there...
    (A water tank ,heavy pieces of wood( Furniture leftouts), Some bricks and an sky full of stars ��)
    Then i just passed my time looking from above the area full of grassland and a few houses, Then i read on mirakee,Listened a 90s song a lot time then i just lead my body to sleep
    .....
    The dark things happening started with the wind, The wind was dead and can't be felt anymore.
    Then i heard the voice of my mom calling "You've left your water bottle ,Come take it!
    Then i was scared a little because of the horror tv shows and the myth itself Chalaava
    (A little info- Chalaava is a devil creature in indian myths , Who seems to fool you by taking the forms of your known ones, The people too say that we shouldn't reply to a Chalaava's question or statement as it can then infest our soul or kill us.)
    ...
    Afterward I took a wise decision, I replied my mom and took my bottle from downstairs.
    The reason; as I'm more afraid of my mom than any chalaava , As i know what happens when i don't reply to her ��.
    ...
    Then I thought to concentrate on my sleep .As I was trying , I saw something strange...! I saw 2 lights flashing from the area nearby , The one was on a ground level on a folding bed (manja) ,And other was from an house as it was just like a open photo gallery��️
    (They designed this way)
    Then the light from the house changed it form unlikely, I was just feeling like some shadow is trying to hide from something. And i don't know what was more scary .....The light , apparition or the other light noticing it from below. And yeah the light from the open gallery house was humanless ...��
    Then all of a sudden the open gallery house light dissapeared .The light below too dissapeared .
    ....
    Then i again tried to get a sleep , But I can't because the Bloodsuckers were infesting on me so bad.
    That even I can't tell myself that I'm asleep or awake.
    The Bloodsuckers were none other than
    ...
    ..
    .
    mosquitoes (macchar).
    Don't worry the end is near(To the reader)
    Then i saw many scary things from my half open eyes and half asleep state,Some are.....
    •The neighbour's black water tank was moving from its place as it was taking the form of a faceless,Body less creature which appeared like the dark force ,hard to explain .��
    •I saw my teddy sleeping nearby me , But in a blink of the eye, I saw him on the other blue water tank, Hiding and watching me Suspensefully. I don't realise it in a second Because then i closed my eyes for 10 seconds as My body was tired AF,But when I opened my eyes after 10 seconds ,I was scared and completely shook to the core and soul , The reason that i noticed my teddy was just right next to me.
    But i don't know why i think he had changed his position ��.
    .....(My bloody hallucination ��)
    But a good thing that i experience that night was turning the sky from extreme dark sky to the pretty blue sky as the dawn was approaching.
    End Of The Story ||
    .
    (DON'T get me wrong I'm still a night lover,But the experiences I have that night made me crave for the Light blue sky beautifully bidding a goodbye to the stars and making the birds to chirp beautifully as the sun was too dim to be seen, But hopefully i was still accompanied by the Beautiful moon and 2 or 3 stars)
    ....

    Note- I welcome both Suggestions and criticism.So feel free to comment your opinions and feelings.
    .
    P.S.- Don't think the writer's a crack mind, It's a Semi -Fiction
    (Some reality,Some Fiction)
    So just chillax!!!
    #story #horror #suspense #thriller #moon #stars #teddy #dark #sky #disturbing #deep
    #light #paranormal #supernatural #life #night #sleep #darkness #pod

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    The Dark Night :

    A Day Before
    ©uttkarsh_15

  • uttkarsh_15 16w

    *Just yesterday*
    It was a midnight situation,I was feeling so insomniac that i can't sleep .
    There were many reasons behind this first was the bloody Overthinking and second was the awesome wala weather,Garmi ke mausam me poora pahadon wala feel aa raha tha by god ❄️����.
    ....
    I'm just a night person and i love nightwalks, Whether it's outside or At my terrace,
    So i Climbed up my stairs and noticed the area around me which later turned out to be nothing usual,
    .....(The lights were gone)
    It was a total blackout wherever i was looking,
    It was at that moment my vibe changed ����,
    And it was feeling like I'm in a horror movie where i don't know where i am and all the houses,Grass areas and streets were covered in darkness and there was just a slight moonlight , After a while,The wind speed which was very calm turned out to be very disastrous and scary,
    Then i returned back and I was welcomed by strange sounds both huge and minor ones(The strange sounds are my worst nightmares, It scares me as hell as i feel like I'm havin phonophobia)
    ...Firstly the door which was opened with the doorstopper, Closed all of a sudden with a loud sound , And then there was a slight sound Which seems like someone is whispering a scary melody.
    ...
    I sleep in a different room all alone as I hate AC(Yeh wali kahani kisi aur din ....),So I opened the door of the room where my parents and sister sleep, And i noticed nothing strange as all were asleep.
    Just after a few seconds mom got up and told me to adjust with them, as the electricity was out and the ac was also not supported by inverter (agar pichli story padhi hogi toh you'll know a little ��)....
    ....
    She told me to do so because in that situation The load will be on one fan and the inverter will last long
    ....(Just a Common thing)
    And then i felt asleep there, IDK know why i was feeling that my head got really heavy it wasn't headache just an ajeeb feeling when i woke up at 9 , Even after that i slept from 11 am to 4 pm in afternoon
    .....
    Maybe it all happened in my hallucinations which ate up my sleep ,Or seriously Some dark forces were playing around me ........!
    #story #suspense #thriller #horror #dark #deep #kisse #justyesterday #life #night #sleep #darkness #moments

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    The Dark Night

  • shanthi_yella 16w

    Vathi met Vaathi

    At 8.00 pm, my laptop was locked. I could not understand. I thought Shenoy was telling me to have dinner.

    I had dinner and came back. As I opened my laptop, I typed Hamsa143 in the password area. But it said the wrong password. Your new password hint is Vathi143.

    I typed a new password and it opened. I checked my social media accounts. Again, I saw Smrithi posting questions in my Quora digest account. Again weird questions.

    Question 1
    A girl called her boyfriend 100 times. She is so cozy. Do you know her?

    Question 2
    A 33-year-old man is traveling from Shimla to Bangalore tonight. Did you ever meet him?

    Question 3
    The Andhra Pradesh police started an investigation in the case of pregnant women who died falling from a hill in the Nallamala forest.
    Aarav Goswamy, an investigative journalist started a debate on this topic on a news channel.

    Question 4
    Which forest is near Ellamandhu?

    I thought what are these questions. I'm unable to understand this woman. What is she trying to tell?

    I don't know the answers to the first three questions. But I know for the fourth question.
    The forests near Ellamandhu are Nallamala and Ananthagiri hills forest area.
    But Nallamala is very near.

    Thinking about it. I slept. I was tired of studying for 13 hours on that day.

    A glance from my ebook vathi met Vaathi @webnovel. Google Vathi met Vaathi to read and look at the trailer in my IG account @yellashanthi
    ©shanthi_yella

  • anudeepgurram 16w

    The failed detective !

    That was 1990 October 2 , praneeth sits on chair with disappointment and frustration as he was not getting any cases to solve since 6 months ! Praneeth suddenly gets up from the chair after hearing shoe sounds from the stairs of his house , a guy came to his house and waved hello to praneeth !

    Praneeth :- hello , who is this ?
    Madhavan :- hii praneeth , I am Madhavan ! I am here for your help.

    Praneeth:- okay ! What can I do for you ? Madhavan:- I am Madhavan , I work at Bangalore , I have a younger brother named mohan. Our parents passed away in a train accident , when we were young. So we have grown up at our grandmother's home in Hyderabad. One day I got a long leave and came to see my brother and grandmother to Hyderabad ! That day my grandmother was crying a loud as my brother was missing ! I took it easy as he used to move away from house all the time and come back after 2 or 3 days due to his anger issues , mohan is a chill guy who roams on roads and wastes all the money and time ! Grandmother scolded him that day. so he went off from home ! But after 10 days also he didn't reach home . I was little afraid and filled a complaint in nearby police station , but there was no use. It has been 1 year , but still he is not with us .... Please help me and find my brother !

    Praneeth:- well , I try my best ! Don't worry ....give me all the details and details of police station you filled a complaint at !

    Madhavan:- please find my brother as soon as possible in a month , as my grandmother is not well and living her last days , she wants to see mohan.
    Praneeth :- I will ! Don't worry ....
    Madhavan:- what is you don't find him ? Praneeth:- excuse me ? What do you mean mr.madhavan !

    Madhavan:- I am sorry , but ... I lost all the hopes on policemen , and my one and only hope is you .... Please find him In month .... Praneeth :- I promise you , I will find him....if am don't solve this case in a month , then I would resign my detective job !

    Madhavan :- I trust you , hoping you will help me in this !

    Madhavan leave the room , praneeth feels excited and starts the case . He goes to the police station and asks about the few detailes , policemen say him that mohan was in his friend's room for a day and leaved from their Praneeth goes and enquires Mohan's friend, he gets no clues from their ! Immediately praneeth goes to Madhavan's area to enquire the locals , and everyone says they don't know anything about this case. Praneeth feels disappointed and frustrated , once he goes to Madhavan's home , and immediately he was 'shocked' after seeing Madhavan's house was locked !! He calls Madhavan and Madhavan says that he went to Chennai for a business work , praneeth feels suspicious and sees from window. He was again 'shocked' after seeing empty room !! Their was no one in the house. Praneeth again calls to Madhavan .... Madhavan replies that ," I asked my grandmother to stay in local relative's house as she was always feeling sad and depressed ! It will be like a refreshment for her" Days passes on and praneeth gets no clues , he was stuck with the case. One day praneeth gets an idea and immediately he ran away to the Madhavan's area and searches for a CCTV ! Yes , he found that their is a CCTV at that place. Praneeth calls his friend who is a police , and asks him to give the footage of the CCTV. After sometime his friend calls him and says that , the CCTV was just fixed 3 months ago .... So they don't have the footage of 1 year back ... Praneeth feels so frustrated and looses hopes on the case , finally the last day has come. Praneeth was sitting in the hall of his home. Madhavan comes to praneeth's home and asks whether he solved case or not ... Praneeth sits silently with no answer , and after some time he says I was unable to solve the case ! And after going soo deep into the case , again I am getting to the starting point ....I am sorry ! He says.... Madhavan says it's okay , my brother came home !! Praneeth was literally shocked and said , how did he come home ? Did you find him ? Or how ? ... Madhavan simply laughs loud and says "the photo which I gave to you on that day was not my brother's photo that was my photo when I was a little young ! As it is in black and white form you was not able to recognize ! In fact I don't have any brother " Praneeth asks , then why did do all these things ?? Why am I given this case ? . Madhavan says , I am also a detective ! I wanted you in my team to work for me , so If I ask you directly to form with me. Then you would say no because your ego comes in between !! I wanted to kill your ego first , and then ask you to work with me , I heard lot of cases solved by you . And I like the way you solve complex cases. So I want you to be my friend and let's work together. In fact i created all the clues for this case , and it was all drama .... Praneeth smiles softly and says , I am impressed by the way you approached , sure !! I am interested in working with you.
    ©anudeepgurram

  • uttkarsh_15 15w

    I'm going to start a Dark Horror Series which will consist of 4 Chapters. ....

    •Its about the doll whom the child loves but abandon it once they grow up,But the doll Doesn't

    • Persons who still befriends a teddy when They are scared or Alone And (Vice Versa)

    •The Third One Is A Surprise ....

    •The 4th one is the night wanderer,Whom we won't Notice,But he Notices us Every night (I'm gonnna tell you only this much now)


    However it may take some time,As I'm still working on it
    .....
    But I'll try to make It worth the wait !
    P.S- It'll be a Semi -Fiction
    #dark #horror #suspense #thriller #story #series #paranormal #supernatural

    Read More

    The Doll, The Teddy, The Thing And The Night Wanderer

    4 stories , All interconnected....
    ©uttkarsh_15

  • satabdeetripathy 16w

    LOVE

    Love needs dramatic suspense to make one believe that it is meant to be, that it is what they call fate.
    ©satabdeetripathy

  • shanthi_yella 17w

    Vathi met Vaathi

    Vathi a young girl who completed graduation met Vaathi(teacher in tamil) at her training institute. They fel in love. To the twist Vaathi's best friend proposes vathi, who is also the teacher of Vathi at her graduation college. Vathi informs everything to Vaathi. A sudden mysterious fiction happens in their love story. Join us to know about the mystery in this triangle love story.
    Karan hacked the laptop of Vathi. karan is a common friend of Vinay and Shenoy.
    why did he hack her laptop? who asked him to do?
    Read to know the mystery..
    This is a triangle love story with psychological trauma, death mystery, missing cases and suspense thriller.

    This book is named as Vathi met Vaathi, because a teacher is called as Vaathiyaar in Tamil language. Both Shenoy and Vinay are her teachers. She met both of them in her life at different situations. Both the men love her.
    The words Vathi and Vaathi are in rhyming.
    Please continue reading. To know Vathi met which Vaathi at the end.
    Available @webnovel

    If you are interested in watching AV trailer of the book please check it out in my Instagram account @yellashanthi and youtube channel @shanthi yella
    ©shanthi_yella

  • shanthi_yella 17w

    Vathi met Vaathi

    Jr. Dr. Ali abdal was narrating the story of their patient named Vathi to his senior Dr. Arjuna Ahluwalia.
    Narration:
    Vathi a young, energetic, studious, and beautiful girl from a village named Ellamandhu completed her graduation in one of the top universities of India.
    After her graduation, she joined a Company for the compulsory training program. Where she met her teacher named Shenoy (Vaathi- teacher in the Tamil language). Shenoy was ten years older than Vathi.
    In the beginning, Shenoy did not like Vathi as he found her dominating, straightforward person.
    Shenoy had a feeling of insecurity regarding Vathi's talent. But later he realized that she is open-minded and supports him in every work and she can handle a big team. Shenoy liked Vathi's leadership skills.
    One day Vathi came late to the office. Shenoy was angry with her. But she saw an abandoned infant in a dustbin on the way to the office. She took that infant to a nearby hospital and registered a complaint in the police station. Knowing this everyone was impressed by Vathi and they help her in finding a good place, parents who are ready to adopt the child. Shenoy liked social responsibility in Vathi.
    After two years Shenoy realized that he loves Vathi and plans to propose to her. He takes her to a drive and proposes to her. Vathi also loves him but she takes time to accept him.
    Vathi's contract with the company was for two and a half years. After the completion of the contract, she has to join an institute for further education. Vathi accepts Shenoy's proposal before she leaves the office. They started a live-in relationship that was kept secret from everyone else. They have the habit of using Team-viewer on laptops and chat during work hours.
    After five months Vathi leaves the company and goes to Goa for further education. Shenoy visits Goa very often to meet Vathi.
    She always teased Shenoy for being fat and increasing his belly fat Uncle. As he is quite older than her. Even Shenoy teases her that she is a lady don because of her dominating nature and leadership skills.
    During her classes at Goa University, she meets Vinay. Vinay was her teacher at her graduation level. Vinay also joins as a guest lecturer for a PG course at Goa University. Where she comes to know that Vinay and Shenoy are best friends.
    Vathi tries to avoid Vinay as he had a crush on her during graduation level. Vinay proposes to her in the college. As she ignores him, he tried texting and calling her.
    She was swirling around whether to inform Shenoy or not? The covid lockdown begins.
    She tells everything to Shenoy. But before she told him, Vinay informed Shenoy that he proposed to her. Vinay spoke very badly about Vathi describing her that she is sexy and beautiful with attractive eyes, long hair, thunder thighs. Shenoy was annoyed by listening to his friend's words.
    Shenoy loses his temper and shouts at her abruptly. He was in pain. He was doing gym for one year to get a six-pack and gift it to Vathi on her birthday. He lost his morale with a pain that she might love or get married to Vinay as he is more handsome than him. Shenoy tells a breakup to Vathi.
    This was the time when Vathi has to give her PG exams during Covid times. She was preparing with her laptop making notes. She tried to call Shenoy, texted him but he messaged her that
    " We never happy and we will never"
    IT'S over!!!
    She cries for days together leaving her preparation for exams. She was writing this exam for Shenoy, as he wanted her to top the university and join him in his business as a women director.
    She starts writing an e-diary every time she remembers him. Suddenly she calls Shenoy. He speaks to her in a good tone but doesn't assure about their relationship.
    She didn't sleep for one week. Her parents were worried about her. They tried to discuss with her and told her to concentrate on her exams. She started preparing for exams. But suddenly she received a Bluetooth call to her laptop. Usually, Shenoy makes Bluetooth calls. She thinks that Shenoy is near to her home. Came to meet her.
    But when she goes out Vinay's car was parked near the society gate in Ellamandhu. Vinay was not ready to leave her. She comes back checks her laptop then she realized that her laptop was hacked by someone. They changed all her passwords related to social media accounts. She runs a program to check the location of the hacker.
    Then after checking the location and IP address she realized that her laptop was hacked by Shenoy's and Vinay's childhood friend Karan who is an ethical hacker by profession.

    The first chapter of my ebook Vathi met Vaathi @webnovel
    ©shanthi_yella

  • shanthi_yella 17w

    Vathi met Vaathi

    Chapters released till today..
    1. Fantasy love story to Suspicious mystery
    2. Things are piled up
    3. Digging the past
    4. The Big writing.
    5. The big writing-continues
    6. Calligraphy book
    7. My name is Hamsavathi Adah Devaraj
    8. Where is Shenoy?
    9. I'm afraid of

    When I started writing this book I had no idea about how to plan chapter names?
    Slowly I did it.. My chapter names are a part of the dialogue of my characters in that particular chapter. Situational chapter names.

    Like here I named chapter 7 " My name is Hamsavathi Adah Devaraj" which is a part of this dialogue in this chapter
    " Dr. Kanika reading the book in her room.
    She has completed reading half of the book.

    Before going to bed she reads a page with a line saying, " Vinay used to call me Hamsa in Goa University. I always hate, when he calls me Hamsa. He calls me Hamsa because my name is Hamsavathi Adah Devaraj."

    Her parents are continuing their familial legacy. They respect both Indian culture and Italian culture. That's why they named her Hamsavathi, an Indian name from the mantra
    "Hamsavathi mukhya shakti samanvitha" meaning " Goddess Durga who is surrounded by Shakthi or strength called Hamsavathi".
    Her Biblical name Adah means adornment.
    Great cultures.
    May God bless Vathi with peace of mind.
    It's time to sleep."

    Vathi met Vaathi @webnovel ebook
    ©shanthi_yella

  • shanthi_yella 17w

    Vathi met Vaathi

    Dr. Kanika reading the book in her room.
    She has completed reading half of the book.

    Before going to bed she reads a page with a line saying, " Vinay used to call me Hamsa in Goa University. I always hate, when he calls me Hamsa. He calls me Hamsa because my name is Hamsavathi Adah Devaraj."

    Her parents are continuing their familial legacy. They respect both Indian culture and Italian culture. That's why they named her Hamsavathi, an Indian name from the mantra
    "Hamsavathi mukhya shakti samanvitha" meaning " Goddess Durga who is surrounded by Shakthi or strength called Hamsavathi".
    Her Biblical name Adah means adornment.
    Great cultures.
    May God bless Vathi with peace of mind.
    It's time to sleep.

    A glance from my book Vathi met Vaathi.
    Join the journey of our female- leadVathi.
    My taught in this para is to tell about global integration and cultures.
    Available @webnovel @wattpad
    Follow #vathimetvaathi
    ©shanthi_yella

  • shanthi_yella 17w

    Vathi met Vaathi

    A Writer's achievement when his reader folds his legs places his chin on his knees with the book or e-book in his hand and biting nails of another hand.

    #edge of the scene...

    My ebook Vathi met Vaathi@webnovel... Fingers crossed...I want this moment...
    ©shanthi_yella