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  • soshefeels 27w

    She

    There's a youthful woman I found within the reflect.
    She was by all accounts misplaced in someplace.
    She was by all accounts in an interchanging world.
    She was by all accounts on edge almost what to do and where to go.
    I may see her anguish and discouragement.
    Maybe she was broken.
    Perhaps she was in distress.
    Perhaps she was finding answers to her request.
    She had tears in her eyes but she had a smile all over endeavored to cover it.
    And a while later, there happened to divination.
    The wizardry she won't ever consider.
    A voice that changed her.
    The voice said to her, "no matter anything happens I am with you. You'll reliably be my wonderful delivery person. Just remain with me."
    From that point, she was cheerful, carrying on with a bona fide life.
    It was a voice from her soul.


    ©soshefeels

  • ehsaas007 38w

    Bheekh...

    "Bhaisahab..kuch khane ko dedo"..ek buzurg mahila ladkhadati si awaaj mein dukaandar se boli..tabhi wahan ek ladka aaya..itne mein aurat ne dubara kaha "bhaiya kuch dedo..paise nahin hain mere paas"..tabhi wo ladka bola.."kuch mat dena isko..kaam dhaam karte nahi aajate hain bheek mangne"..ye sab updesh dekar wo dukaandar se bola, "bhai ek cigrette dena"..wo mahila abhi bhi wahin khadi thi..majboor thi shayad..bhook se..tabhi to taano ka kuch asar na hua..use wahin khada dekh ladka phir use dutkarta hua bola "kaha na jaa yahan se"..ladke ne cigrette jalayi..or kash marta hua..dukandaar se bola "bhai likh lena..baad mein dedoonga"..dukaandar bola "oh bhai, "pehle ke do mahine ke paise baaki hain ab udhar nhi chalega aur!"..ladka bola "marta kyun hai..dedoonga naa..itna paise leke kahan jaega mar jaega jaldi"..baddua si dekar or dheenth ki tarah keh sunke cigrette phoonkta wo chale gaya..aurat abhi bhi wahin khadi thi..dukaandaar ne shayad daya karke ek biscuit ka packet dediya..wo dher saari duayein dekar chali gayi..dukaandaar soch mein doob gaya...sahi mein bheek kisne mangi.. ab aap tay karein..!!
    ©ehsaas007

  • ehsaas007 38w

    FARZ..A STORY OF A FATHER..

    Aaj ka din Ramesh ke liye roz se zara hatke tha..
    Subha jaldi apni taxi leke nikal gaya tha wo ghar se..
    Beti se waada jo kiya tha..aj uske janmdin par gift mein use cycle laake denge uske papa..
    Thode thode rupay jod kar usne kuch paise ikatthhe kar liye the ki uske liye cycle le sake par phir bhi kuch paise kam the..wo chahta tha aaj jyada se jyada paise kamaana..kaafi koshish karke bhi shaam tak poore paise na jod paya to dukhi hua..cycle ki dukan pe pahunch kar usne poocha.."bhaisahab mein jo pichhle mahine cycle dekhke gaya tha 2000 wali..usmein kuch kam hojata to...bacchii ke liye leni hai..aj janmdin hai uska..pehli baar waada kiya hai bacchii se is poore mahine jod jod ke paise bachaye hain par 1700 hi hain mere paas"..dukandaar, jo chup chap sun raha tha bola.."are bhai wo sab theek hai par mein pehle hi 500 kam kar chuka or na hopayega..tabhi peeche bethe dukaan malik ke pita apni kursi se uthe or bole "are tum?.."tum to wahi ho naa jisne mujhe apni taxi main kaafi din pehle ghar chhoda tha?.."mujhe tumhein paise dena baaki reh gaya tha..bhool gaye?..Ramesh hairan tha.. use aisa koi vakyaa yaad nhi aaya..wo bola "kahan sahab..mujhe yaad nahi aisa kuch"..dukaandar ke pita jo kaafi buzurg the muskuraye or bole.."tum bhool gaye ..koi baat nhi ye lo tumhare paise..400 rupay uske hath mein thamate hue uske paas aake bole "ye cycle or mithai le jana bitiya ke liye"..Ramesh ka man to nhi mana par itne buzurg admi keh rahe hain or shayad mein hi bhool gaya hoon ye sochke usne paise rakhliye..dukaandar jo sab dekh raha tha bola.."bolo ab leni hai cycle?..Ramesh khushi se bola "ji bilkul!..dedo bhaisahab, ab to paise bhi poore hogaye"..wo khushi khushi cycle leke chala gaya apni bitiya ke liye..ab dukaandaar apne pitaji se bola.."Pitaji apne jhoonth kyun kaha aap uski taxi main gaye the..or paise kyun diye bewajah usko?.."picchle bees saal se aap khudki ya meri gaadi se dukaan aate jaate hain..taxi mein to kabhi bethte dekha nahin apko..phir ye sab"...dukandar ke pita muskuraye..bole "beta jab ye dukaan nahi thi or mein apne sangharsh ke din bita raha tha..tab ek din maine bhi tujhse aisa hi waada kiya tha ki tujhe ek badiya saa tohfa laakar doonga..par mein nahin de paaya..usdin teri ankhon mein to ansoo nahi the bete par apne bete ko uske janmdin par kuch nahi de paane par mein bahut roya tha..bhagwan se kaha tha bhagwan kabhi kisi baap ko aisa din na dikhaye..bahut mehnat ki or ye chaar dukaanein tum bhaiyon ko virasat mein di..aj tum apne bachho ka har sapna poora kar sakte ho..par aaj is admi ki ankhon mein wahi majboori dekhi..maine jhoonth kaha tha..ye sahi hai..par isliye ki wo bhi to kisi ka pita hai..aj uski ankhon mein ansoo hote..majboori ke..par mere ek jhoonth se uski ankhon mein khushi thi..garv tha..ki usne pita hone ka farz to nibhaya!.."to bata beta maine galat kiya kya?..."nahi pitaji..apne bilkul sahi kiya"..dukandaar ki ankhon mein ansoon bhar aaye sath hi garv bhi..usne apne pita ko gale laga liya..
    Duniya mein bahut burayi hai..badmashi hai makkari hai..par phir bhi insaaniyat or bhagwan bhi to hai..
    ©ehsaas007

  • obscuredwords 109w

    Love is weird, when you have it, you don’t want it, when it’s given to you, you reject it, and when in the darkest corner, you wish a yes, you never get it.
    I believe, it comes in unexpected places, and should be accepted then, else it leaves you wondering, if only...
    It’s like a small feeling dormant, then it grows rapidly, like a fire engulfing you, and as the moment passes, it’s all white ash, cold like the snow.
    It changed you, not the world for you.
    But I believe, you should let go of the what ifs and just try, like they say “it’s better to try and fail, than giving up. “ because love only grows, howsoever hard, you try to push it away, it grows and hurts and grows.
    It’s beautiful.
    Pain is beautiful.
    To Love, the feeling of pain 🥂

    #Love # pain #heartbreak #weird #awkward #hurt #confession
    It feels better after confessing though, it’s like you gave control to another person, and let go of your inhibitions.
    #LoveYourself #mirakee #ceesreposts #longwriteup

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    Love

    If it could hurt more,
    It would’ve
    But my heart has
    become immune to pain.

    ©obscuredwords

  • iamnitishthakur 186w

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    P.s.s.-
    नोट- मैं कोई ख़ास व्यक्ति नहीं हूँ । मैं, रचा गया हूँ । किसी घटना से प्रेरित होकर । मैं,आपमें से कोई भी हो सकता हूँ । लेकिन,भारत के परिपेक्ष्य में मैं अक़्सर हर तीसरे मध्यमवर्ग परिवारों का स्वामित्व करने वाला पुरुष या बेटा हूँ ।
    यहाँ तक रुचिपूर्वक पढ़ने के लिए आपका,हार्दिक धन्यवाद ।��


    #hindi #हिंदी #hindiwriters #writeup #longwriteup #essay #लेख #hindikavyasangam #mirakeewriters #mirakee #mirakeeofficial #nitishthakur #iamnitishthakur @mirakeeworld @mirakee @hindiwriters @hindikavyasangam @mirakeewriter @mrunaalgawhande

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    चिंताएँ

    (Part 1)
    उसकी दवाइयों के गोलियों को फाँकते देखने से दर्दनाक दृश्य इस दुनिया मे कोई और नहीं ।

    सवालों का घेरा औऱ फूटी क़िस्मत से बातें हज़ार शुरू हो जातीं है बस उस दृश्य के एकमात्र चित्रण से ।

    एक अनुराग का सागर सा उमड़ आता है ।
    साथ ही पछतावे,खीझ औऱ तनाव ले आता है ।


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    ©iamnitishthakur