fromwitchpenThe fourth one is my favorite this is a phenomenal piece of writing too unique and amazing Many congratulations on editors choice
treble_clef@fromwitchpen thank you sanam.. I saw a flood of notifications flown in from fromwitchpen.. ☺.. I absolutely have no clue how you do it... !! U are one hell of a writer/poet and an ahhhmmmaaaaazing reader too.. Lots of hugs for that.. .
Thanks for the feedback too.. At least a few said 4th is their favorite.. Somehow that seemed more real i guess...
Thanks again.. Love you.. Take care you..
gaurangigSeven sevens! The fourth one an absolute truth!
It's not really an #argument ...! Just some lingering thoughts that met my pen and paper.
'Time and tide wait for none' isn't it a saying of the wise? Why then time stops still when I look into those sapphire eyes? __________
'Time flies by like the shooting star', pouts the little girl at the town fair as she hops out of the Carousel Her mother's eyes keep oscillating to the clock tower She is keyed up why the hands are moving much slower
Time is sipped in customized glasses by every terrestrial soul Its speedometer runs wayward It's attuned to your smile and scowl Time spent laughing, with your loved ones, is shrunken by the dial Time's ruthless torture, knows the man in the six by eight cell
Time is a tireless ruler, Time, a masterly healer, Time wipes the flowing tears; Time, a dying man's prayer, Time destroys, begets havoc, tumbles the empires down Time crumbles the sturdiest forts, transforms a mere stone divine.
Time has seen - the dawn of faith, earth shrink to the size of a grain No one dares to capture it's girth None have witnessed it's birth. I watch it slip through my fingers, my fist fails to arrest Caught in Time's colossal web, I am just a miniscule spec.
treble_clefHey Sanam.. I'm glad to see u. I guess u weren't keeping well.. Hope u r better now.
Thank you for the lovely feedback... It always makes me feel great reading your comments.. Your words do have that effect..
treble_clefAnd yes divine.. I always get that wrong.. This time even my cell auto correct didn't come to my help.. Thank u really..
treble_clefAbout your query... Changes a mere stone divine as in, with time a new faith/religion/belief system is formed. There I tried to contrast with the previous 3 lines, where the negative things such as destruction or end of dynasties are highlighted. It says something to the effect of a person starting to worship a particular object and eventually it becoming a massive institution of worship. Have I cleared the confusion?
fromwitchpenIt's my pleasure and yeah some hectic schedule and problems are going on.
I wanted to congratulate you that say but things got out of my hands . I'm still sorry about this thing .
I'm glad keep smiling and expressing beautiful soul ❤️
fromwitchpenOh , Now I understood I was just a bit confused how a stone divine . Really sorry for the inconvenience but this actually was triggering my mind so I queried about this .
Thank you so much for elaborating and giving your time stay blessed
capricious_quillThis gives such a sweet soft vibe ! Prudent usage of onomatopoeia . It seems like you have also written it with your motherly instinct for your son thus making it closer to the heart
treble_clef@capricious_quill you caught that right.. I was in fact imagining that soft tender moment as I was writing this.. BTW, I was definitely a struggle writing a lullaby.. U tend to want to use bigger vocab, but u have to kinda keep it low and simple...