prose_nexusThis is quite something, my friend. If I might offer a candid critique: If your piece is lengthier than a simple scroll, it'll be a bit tedious to work through as a reader. #foodforthought
gemsofficiel@prose_nexus Thank you. I'm new to this app so I'm still trying to figure it out. I appreciate your critique. Is it too long to read? And what do you feel is the appropriate length for a poem here?
prose_nexus'The silent killer' piece is beautiful. The length of the work depends on you, but what you have to consider is whether it's a work that simply conveys a singular subject matter or an essay that may dive into things for a long time. Keep the focus on what you wish to show us. Hit me up on IG:@damon.lite if you feel the need.
And, i wanna love again, love, like it's one last time, when you were good to me, where my eyes cried to you, love, before saying grace, when everything clicks on, where regrets are resolved, and, i wanna sleep again, sleep, like it's only a vision, of us getting in together, hallicinating, yet tempting, who knows, in due course, maybe, nevermore.