Miraquill
drenched
reading all those sorrows and hearing all those hearts breaking in the middle of what should have been my REM
wrung me out like the laundry
left me blue under the lunar eclipse
the super blood flower moon pulled the tides of sadness
like rabbits from hats
like the never ending rope of handkerchiefs straight from the gut of poets last night
leaving drenched in the words of the wounded
readers and lovers alike
©charliekaaa
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scaredycat2222 16w
Soaking wet
I dipped my toe in you like a pool because I was curious.
I sunk my foot in ankle deep because you felt so good on my skin I had to know what it would feel like if I went in a little deeper.
Next thing I knew i was waist deep.
From my hips down to my feet I became completely submerged in you while my upper half waited above your water.
Keeping a watchful eye i prepared myself for anything that looked unsafe or even a sound that sounded out of place.
While I was half engulfed in you I wont deny i was still fearful you would harm me.
But Before I could stop myself l let myself go and sank beneath the surface.
I splashed and thrashed and tried to reach for something to grab ahold of to pull myself out
but all I gather in the palm of my hands were tiny little droplets of you.
Once I worse myself out I stopped and found myself floating there completely at will.
Void of any fear, any panic, just you and I completely still.
I felt a warmth wrap around every inch of my body.
If felt totally weightless but something was still weighing me down.
As if I were a feather floating in the wind and an anchor steadily falling to the ground.
I didnt know if I were floating or sinking.
I believe now i was sinking.
I Starred up at the heavenly blue that once baisted the sky and it became harder and harder to see.
I looked down below and all I could make out was a darkness that seemed to go on forever.
It gave off this illusion that i would never reach the bottom.
Everything was completely calm and quiet, it felt like that for an eternity.
It was eerily peaceful.
I heard no sounds except for the pounding of my heart in my chest.
I was warm but had goose bumps all over.
I needn’t come up for air.
Not once did I have the urge to gasp for breath.
My lungs filled with you and you did suffice.
You supported my body effortlessly as I sank lower and lower into the depths of your belly.
I had never before felt a peace like that.
Not even once during my entire life.
©scaredycat22227 0
Drenched
It started with the clouds forming,
The drizzle, the cold that went with every inch of it,
The wind blew.
Having not much of a choice,
I dived in, into the stings of the downpour.
So much I felt stung by a bee.
I took to my heels
Across the road, I ran,
And drenched I got.
It started with the cold that brushed off my skin,
Down to the warmth that filled me after.
Now, I'm panting completely drenched by it...
©the_beautifulmind4 0
himayan_writes
62w
Yellow Sublime
Followed me home tonight!
Yellow Sublime
Not too dull. Not too bright.
Yellow Sublime
Might keep me up at night.
Yellow Sublime
Soothing my sore sight.
Yellow Sublime
I'm drenched in your yellow light.
Yellow Sublime
A sublimating rhyme.
Yellow Sublime
I'm running out of time!
©himayan_writes5 0 2
vasubandhu
85w
Read More#rain #thirst #sorrow #words #poetry #storm #inside #emotions #soul #feelings #dry #thunder #restless #wordporn #thoughts #wordswag #experience #forlorn #writeaway #thoughts #poetry #instawriters #exhausted #introspection #writersofindia #arid #irony #drenched #waiting #pun #wordplay #gyaatverses #writersnetwork #writersworld #mirakee #mirakeeworld #life #readwriteunite #mirakeewriters #accuracy #precision #writerstolli #words #addiction #grit #persistence #might #perceverence #rhetorics #improvements #humours #englishverses #process #gyaat #hope #desire #win #achievement #wisdom #learnings #lessons #i #slapstick #success #wit #anotherday #astounding #surprising #confidence #selfbelief #paitence #experience #mind #win #optimism #philosophy #psychology #smart #relax #compassion #dorky #selfhelp #comic #question #introspection #insight
©Vasubandhu
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Wind fragranced with the cologne of your love, touched me and drenched me in your memories
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sanchari_karmakar
108w
Read More#She #licked #the #little #blood #with #her #tongue #as #it #oozed #down #the #cut #from #his #lips #gently #kissing #the #pain #off #with #her #honey #drenched #lips #rain #kiss #smooch #peck #sweet #soulkiss #kiss your pain #wet #wounds #cuts #romance #quote #oneliners #foreplay #quote #quotes #mirakee #bestquotes #bestquote #happyvalentinesday #roses #red #beautiful #love #like #comment #repost #truelove #forever #thousandyears #writings #scribblings #art #passion #heart #heartbeat #crazy #mad #madlove #flow #loveisintheair #season #elixir #life #couple #couplegoals #partner #lifepartner #he #she #him #her #quotestagram #quotesforinstagram #quotefortheday #quoteoftheday #trend #trendingquotes #lovequotes #instance #scene #intense #feelings #emotions
She licked the little blood with her tongue as it oozed down the cut from his lips, gently kissing the pain off with her honey drenched lips.
©sanchari_karmakar29 7 2
- v__i_v_e_k your writings is now making me to think about you. you are a passionate lover. correct me if i am wrong.
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sharmilajuliet
130w
Read MoreGuys if anyone wants me to read their work tag me on #julietscorner . Don't use my mirakee name tag to tag me. And guys, do read the posts under this tag also when you have time.
Image Credit : To it's rightful owner
21st November 2019
#ovillejo_wt #ovillejo #rain #last #remember #pain #heart #mourn #thorn #memory #drenched #pricking #always #everyday #comforting #hurt #holding #hands #julietscorner #bluepup #tod_wt #pod #p2h #poem2heart #writerstolli #mirakee #writersnetwork #nature #poetry #thoughts #love #life #diaryLast Rain
Do you remember our last rain?
Still it's pain.
Is Holding my hands still do hurt?
In my heart.
Is this distance comforting you?
Its always blue.
While leaving your hands i do knew
Drenched memory will last as thorn
Pricking everyday make me mourn
Still it's pain in my heart, its always blue
©sharmilajuliet152 43 37
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pillow_talk_quotes
139w
She stood drenched in the rain
It was a heavy cloudy evening but she was quiet happy about their meeting. After all, he called her after 4 miserable months and that was enough to blow her mind from a long on going depression. She wore her mulberry coloured dress as he had said her, "You killed me wearing dark colours" so she followed. She fitted her brogues because heels doesn't catch his attention as normal. Applying her thin kajal and putting her lenses, she got ready in just 15 minutes.
She had taken her cab at sharp 5 PM so that she wouldn't be late to arrive. Cold breezes was made her thinking about him continuously, while " Tera ban jaunga" was giving her a heavy goosebumps inside. She felt like other universe. She was smiling and that was bringing glow to her face.
She had brought her dairy with her. She kept it in her lap. She had millions of bulky gossips in her stomach which was making her goofy anyway. She was trying to chronologically listed all her point to tell him (without any break).
After 2 hour of travel, she had stepped down her feet and eagerly looking for his glance. He was sitting in the park's bench, something typing in his phone. She was very happy to see him after so long waited time.
She ran towards him and hugged him tightly. She told her feelings continually to him, breathlessly. She felt something annoying in his face and gave a break to her mouth. She placed her dairy in his hands. She hoped that he would read it but he throwed it and gave her a photograph of his girlfriend.
He started narrating his relationship with that girl to her but that was not worthy for her because her mind was dumped with so much noises. Her mind filled with his talks, his promises, his pampers, his commitments. Eventually, cloud burst out from its comfort. Her tears got mixed with rain droplets. Each drop of rain was blurring her vision. She haven't moved a bit. She kept standing. She kept her feeling drenched in the rain.
©pillow_talk_quotes8 0
ifeanyi_amushie
139w
Read More•In Over My Head
...
This is a piece of poetry from deep within my heart, which was inspired by the original Bethel music song; In Over My Head (Crash Over Me).
It speaks of our relationship and walk with the Holy Spirit, where He calls and pulls us to journey with Him, into the depths of the Spirit. To a place where we lose ourselves completely and find Him totally, to a place where we become drenched and submerged in the waters of the Spirit; swimming in and breathing in the Air of Life.
Be blessed as you read.
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#inovermyhead #iminovermyhead #crashoverme
#furtherandfurther #awayfromtheshore #intothewaters
#drenched #submerged #drenchedandsubmerged #lostcontrol #free #inthedeep
#depths #bethelmusicIn Over My Head
Your love is calling me deeper.
Your love is calling me out
beyond the shore into the waves.
Into dangerous waters
Where feet may fail.
For in these Waters, the flesh will drown and die.
My soul submerged in the deep,
My spirit breathes You in,
And I live to You, and for You.
For these Waters are dangerous to the flesh,
to the old man.
And they are reviving and refreshing
to the new man.
I carry the cross to where I lose my life,
to where His life in me
will be fully found.
My heart moves further, away from the shore.
I journey further, into the waters.
I move from the place of convenience,
from the safety and comfort of the flesh,
Into a place where the Spirit-man rules and dominates,
Where all I can do is to let go
And do Your will.
I journey further and further into these Waters,
Till I am over-my-head, in the waters.
In a place of total surrender
Where I've lost control
And You have absolute control.
To the place where my flesh dies
And my spirit is Alive.
©ifeanyi_amushie1 0
ifeanyi_amushie
139w
Read More•In Over My Head
...
This is a piece of poetry from deep within my heart, which was inspired by the original Bethel music song; In Over My Head (Crash Over Me).
It speaks of our relationship and walk with the Holy Spirit, where He calls and pulls us to journey with Him, into the depths of the Spirit. To a place where we lose ourselves completely and find Him totally, to a place where we become drenched and submerged in the waters of the Spirit; swimming in and breathing in the Air of Life.
Be blessed as you read.
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#inovermyhead #iminovermyhead #crashoverme
#furtherandfurther #awayfromtheshore #intothewaters
#drenched #submerged #drenchedandsubmerged #lostcontrol #free #inthedeep
#depths #bethelmusicIn Over My Head
Your love is calling me deeper.
Your love is calling me out
beyond the shore into the waves.
Into dangerous waters
Where feet may fail.
For in these Waters, the flesh will drown and die.
My soul submerged in the deep,
My spirit breathes You in,
And I live to You, and for You.
For these Waters are dangerous to the flesh,
to the old man.
And they are reviving and refreshing
to the new man.
I carry the cross to where I lose my life,
to where His life in me
will be fully found.
My heart moves further, away from the shore.
I journey further, into the waters.
I move from the place of convenience,
from the safety and comfort of the flesh,
Into a place where the Spirit-man rules and dominates,
Where all I can do is to let go
And do Your will.
I journey further and further into these Waters,
Till I am over-my-head, in the waters.
In a place of total surrender
Where I've lost control
And You have absolute control.
To the place where my flesh dies
And my spirit is Alive.
©ifeanyi_amushie1 0
ifeanyi_amushie
139w
Read More•In Over My Head
...
This is a piece of poetry from deep within my heart, which was inspired by the original Bethel music song; In Over My Head (Crash Over Me).
It speaks of our relationship and walk with the Holy Spirit, where He calls and pulls us to journey with Him, into the depths of the Spirit. To a place where we lose ourselves completely and find Him totally, to a place where we become drenched and submerged in the waters of the Spirit; swimming in and breathing in the Air of Life.
Be blessed as you read.
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#inovermyhead #iminovermyhead #crashoverme
#furtherandfurther #awayfromtheshore #intothewaters
#drenched #submerged #drenchedandsubmerged #lostcontrol #free #inthedeep
#depths #bethelmusicIn Over My Head
Your love is calling me deeper.
Your love is calling me out
beyond the shore into the waves.
Into dangerous waters
Where feet may fail.
For in these Waters, the flesh will drown and die.
My soul submerged in the deep,
My spirit breathes You in,
And I live to You, and for You.
For these Waters are dangerous to the flesh,
to the old man.
And they are reviving and refreshing
to the new man.
I carry the cross to where I lose my life,
to where His life in me
will be fully found.
My heart moves further, away from the shore.
I journey further, into the waters.
I move from the place of convenience,
from the safety and comfort of the flesh,
Into a place where the Spirit-man rules and dominates,
Where all I can do is to let go
And do Your will.
I journey further and further into these Waters,
Till I am over-my-head, in the waters.
In a place of total surrender
Where I've lost control
And You have absolute control.
To the place where my flesh dies
And my spirit is Alive.
©ifeanyi_amushie1 0
sharmilajuliet
140w
Read MoreGuys if anyone wants me to read their work tag me on #julietscorner . Don't use my mirakee name tag to tag me. If you tag by mirakee profile id sometimes I may miss reading your post. If you use #julietscorner I can read this even after the week. So guys, use #tag instead of name tag.
Image Credit : To it's rightful owner
9th September 2019
#drizzle_wt #haiku #drizzle #drizzling #drenched #love #thousands #butterflies #flapping #wings #hearts #julietscorner #bluepup #tod_wt #pod #p2h #poem2heart @mirakee @writersnetwork @writerstolli @poem2heartDrizzling Love
Drenched in your drizzling
Love, thousands of butterflies
Flapping wings in heart.
©sharmilajuliet111 30 40
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sharmilajuliet
@bluecrane thank you so much dear ❤️
And sorry for the late reply - wind_chime7 Fantastic
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rightcalling
143w
Read MoreKeep the rhythm of your love in the heart well or stay away from such zero correlation! ��
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rahulgehlot
143w
Read MoreA hope that keeps you alive.
#motivation #inspiration #success #life #live #love #hope #drenched #alive #memories #feelings #emotions #inspiration #wakeup #goodmorning @rahulgehlot @mirakee @writersnetworkHope
Getting drenched by the
memories in the night
and waking up like nothing
happened, That's hope which
keeps you Alive.
©rahulgehlot20 0 2
rightcalling
143w
Read MoreIf a creation doesn't fit to balance the universe, then this is not a valid point of view. That's why all things are valid, when you create something wrong unconsciously, someone inadvertently creates its counterpart in poise.
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Some people simply share others point of views, as being in love with their perspective, as well as balance!
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#drenched #perspective #irritatingpoem #creation✨⏰ #universe #balance #harmony #evidence ⛓️��������️✍️©rightcalling
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rightcalling
143w
Read MoreNothing is more irritating to me than hearing outdoor music, as it can easily snatch all your attention and �� detach the mind's connection from own wireless musical chord. In fact, we're nothing without experience!
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I'm writing this article not to be drenched, but about the entrenched, which join the mind connection with the universe. If we decide to join for the diversion, why then you cry when it works well as designed by you, don't cry, change your attention or its retention remains lifelong.
If we had paid more attention, we would have found that answer was under our noses the whole time. ⏰
The reason why it's difficult to achieve a great success in our profession, it's simply because the music for us; we neither care to create much, nor even willing to hear at such, rather it seems a nuisance to seek own universal essence. Somehow we are the experimenter, but sometimes we don't know what we are looking for, as a result, it's difficult to keep well rhythm in between heart and mind with the outcome. Hope it's the reason behind!
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feelings_for_1
151w
Monsoon !
Monsoon season
Heavy rain
One umbrella
Two people
One drenched in rain
One drenched in love.
©feeling_for_127 0 2
livingpearl
151w
Rain
I danced in the first rain
to get drenched
Only if I had known
it would burn me instead
©livingpearl10 2
the_starry_mind
152w
Read MoreAn emotion that rises within me whenever it rains after a scorching blaze.
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@writersnetwork @writerstolli @mirakeeworld @mirakee #pod @writers_paradise @readwriteunite @clifton2 @laughing_soul @meghasharma @geraldine_mary #drenched #heart #rain #she #petrichor #breathless #pluviophile #ripples #thunder #enchanted #ballet #jazz #blaze #finally
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Thank you so much for reading!!! ����A Drenched Heart
And finally,
In the blaze of my prayers,
She rained,
Upon a pluviophile like me.
A ballet of ripples,
An exquisite sight,
On the jazz of thunder,
In cold and blue lights.
But the enrapturing colors,
Of a thousand rainbows,
Failed to fascinate me,
For she left me,
Drenched and enchanted,
In her intricate petrichor,
breathless for more.
©the_starry_mind10 3 1
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the_starry_mind
@zidfridgutt Thanks my friend!
Have a good weekend - _aradhya Rain, feeling the rain in this scorching heat, sure feels good in Varanasi. Well, the whole India, I guess. Still, amazingly penned down. Nice words. Loved it❤️
- the_starry_mind @_aradhya Yeah, I can totally feel you. Thank you so much for reading!
