#disturbing

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  • uttkarsh_15 12w

    I kindly request to each and Every reader who'll read this to check up the Whole 4 part story of @muskiiiii . As she'd written So precisely And Beautifully On the Disturbing reality Of our World .
    She'd beautifully written about how the parents are blessed with a girl child and how they feel, How she grows up And One day Her age of weaving sweet dreams is turned into nightmare By someone who she knew and trusted ...
    She suffers the whole thing for 2 or 3 years without telling anyone else.I literally think her words Have feels And that too strong ones
    ......
    Just last words - A Must Read
    #disturbing #reality #social #evil

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    Disturbing Reality

    I was not going to Talk About this Or even write about this ever on mirakee But some Strong feeling made me write this up. As I know out of the Many sub-genres of horror like deep,dark and Psychological this is the Most scariest of all And not only this but also it affects our mental health for a period and to a greater extent......As I remember I've just seen 3 disturbing Movies in my life ,And after watching Every single movie My Mind Was in trauma For atleast 2 or 3 weeks .Even I was questioning My existence Because that movies depicts So Much Disturbing reality and How the people suffer those atrocities and Horrible things by none other than the Humans Itself . That's why I always Say Demons And Devils Are not the most scariest creatures,Humans Are the most Horrifying creatures of all time
    .......
    And The most important thing -:
    Whether Like it or not but These Disturbing Movies and Stories are Very much Important For Our society. I'm not saying they are important Because only to Empathise with the Survivors And Feeling their Pain But also To Make society realise what Kind Of Evil does It occupies . The people should Feel the Disturbing feeling through which The Victim Has Gone just to Figure Out on their own What was the root cause of the Evil lingering in our society . And It sometimes Become Very much Important to Show society the Mirror When It is Occupied with the Evils Of Gang rape, Sexual and Physical Harrasment by Family Member,Someone Killed for Showing some courage As a Dalit and many more evils ....
    ......
    I just want to End This with the Quote of my Favourite writer Manto -: "Agar Aap Inn Afsaanon Ko Bardaasht Nahi Kar sakte,Toh Yeh Zamaana Hi Naqabiliyat-E-Bardaasht Hai"

  • uttkarsh_15 12w

    The Doll, The Teddy, The Thing and The Night Wanderer
    Chapter 1 (The Doll)
    .........................................................................................
    Intro -:
    For the Kids, A doll means a Lot !
    They play with them,share feelings with them,and even sleep with them . But when they grow up, They're supposed to break that relation with the doll
    ..... The one Who chooses not to ,Are thought to be the bad cases. But when the doll Chooses not to do so ..... It's worse .
    ....
    Me and my sister had experienced a lot similiar to this. So I should better start with the latest Incident first

    Latest Incident (Dated Some days ago) -:

    My nani's house is just 2 streets away , and there I have 3 Cousin sisters . Eldest one is 16 y/o ,Middle one is 13 y/o ,And the youngest one is just 4 y/o.And My real Sister's doll (Juju) with whom she used to play in her childhood usually remains At Nani's house as my Youngest cousin sis plays with her . Just a few days ago, Me and my sister were at that place, Sitting on the bed talking to each other about the School, IG , Punjabi songs And other stuff . After a time ,The youngest cousin dropped the doll on the bed , And started playing with her . I said to the middle cousin
    That "The doll seemed a little sad ,when she was laying on The bed.But when the youngest Started playing with her she seemed happy. I don't know if I'm imagining or it really seems to Everyone who notices this" . The middle one said "That's true,when I was a child , I too used to play with alike dolls for hours,And it felt like the dolls reacted to each and every talk and the things...Just like she was a Living Friend".
    ...(Period)
    Just next day....
    The youngest cousin hitted our door In the morning with my uncle .I was just in a half awake state ....
    I remember seeing her carrying the doll in her arms and approaching me .The Youngest Cousin came closer to me and said "The doll wanted to come here , She wanted to stay with you here"....
    And I was totally shocked hearing this !!
    ...........
    My sister's Experience (Somewhere in 2013 or 2014)
    It was a complete midnight situation.My sister Was just 7 at that time .So she used to sleep with the same doll (Juju) on the cornerside of the bed.So she was facing towards her doll which was sleeping left to her. She closed her eyes watching the same doll, After a little while when she opened her eyes ,she could not see her doll sleeping next to her , All she can see was just wall. Her body was totally paralyzed,Like she can't move an inch of her body as she can only see the wall and nothing.After a while she was back to the normal state ,Then she turned her eyes to the roof .There she saw something unnatural ...She saw a lot of dolls on the Ceiling, joining hands ,making a circle and they all were staring my sister.But she was astonished more to see that her own doll was not there .And instead of the ceiling fan, In the area between the circle , She could see the darker portal thing which was very shady and hard to identify. Next morning, she was glad to see her doll back and hugged her and everything was back to normal .
    (After hearing that I was having my own thoughts,I imagined maybe they all were trying to open the doors to another world,maybe My sister's doll was doing so because in the whole process she wasn't one of the dolls and doesn't appeared in front of her,And maybe it was all in my head)
    ......
    The last incident (Dated somewhere 2 or 3 years ago)
    We had a cradle which belonged to my younger sister when she was a kid. But now as we were having a younger kid (At my Nani's house ,that same 4 y/o cousin was just some months old) we decided to hand it over to her.But the cradle never stayed at the same place .Sometimes ..my Cousin travels to our house sitting in the cradle and leaved the house sleeping in her father's arms .So one day my sister was holding the doll In a silly manner,and we were delivering the cradle and the doll both to my Nani's house. On the way Many people Talked a lot weird things about them Such as ...(The women is so heartless that she handed her little baby to her younger sister and is being careless ,Why they are not placing the little baby in the cradle ...So silly they are". i think they said such things as the doll appeared very close to reality such as it was a reborn doll(Reborn dolls are the dolls which looks total real and are custom made),But our one was a total normal one.
    I don't know why but after hearing this, I was disturbed.
    ......
    The Ending - I personally think there's nothing wrong in having a little sweet connection with the doll at any age, But only when we keep in our mind the Difference between the reality and the illusionary world. Because when you start ignoring the difference,It gives her the chance to erase the difference Completely.And if that happens, Your life may turn dark and depressive...you may be left alone and declared a psychopath by the rest of the world and your life may come to a pointless Still.
    .....( Darker Narrative continues )
    Then she'll only play with you, She'll only talk to you, She'll sleep with you every night without you knowing the fact...
    Finally , she'll have total control over your LIFE and Your SOUL......||
    ___________________________________________________
    The Narrative style is inspired from The Lore S1 (Horror Web Series)

    Credits -: The reborn doll reference is from The Lore S1E6.

    Special Credits - I want to thank my sister and my mom For telling me the stories,
    And a sincere apology for Over -dramatising the stories too....
    P.S.- The writer's not a crack mind , It's just semi fiction (Half fiction,Half reality)
    #horror #deep #dark #disturbing #tale #story #supernatural #paranornmal #psychological #suspense #thriller #pod #mirakee @miraquill @writersnetwork #writersnetwork

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    The Doll

    ©uttkarsh_15

  • uttkarsh_15 15w

    Paranormal

    When I downloaded the Paranormal Activity 1 ,It was midnight and all were asleep except me.
    Then I checked My phone charging after the download ,It was 66%
    (And some the horror lovers can tell you,6 is the no of the devil )
    After I screencasted my phone to TV,It started acting silly as i have no controls on the video player .....
    After some time I tried to switch to other app ,
    Then it automatically played the same movie itself .
    When I was going to call my sister for the movie,The screencast just got cancelled Itself.
    And the most weird Part is
    .........
    .
    When the movie was running around 5 minutes time, There was a sudden black out at our house , Even though we have a good inverter, And when we checked the inverter
    ....
    It was switched off

  • uttkarsh_15 15w

    It happened just a day before The Dark Night!!!
    .
    Firstly The electricity cut happened . everybody reacted normal and the electricity was back soon.
    .....
    The electricity cut happened again, And i don't wanna take risks of e. cuts and inverter failures.
    So i picked up my single bed mattress,The sheets,pillow and a teddy and have gone straight to my terrace to sleep ��.
    (Yeah you heard it right,A teddy ��)
    Then i arranged my bed on the cemented floor .
    I'll tell you the environment there...
    (A water tank ,heavy pieces of wood( Furniture leftouts), Some bricks and an sky full of stars ��)
    Then i just passed my time looking from above the area full of grassland and a few houses, Then i read on mirakee,Listened a 90s song a lot time then i just lead my body to sleep
    .....
    The dark things happening started with the wind, The wind was dead and can't be felt anymore.
    Then i heard the voice of my mom calling "You've left your water bottle ,Come take it!
    Then i was scared a little because of the horror tv shows and the myth itself Chalaava
    (A little info- Chalaava is a devil creature in indian myths , Who seems to fool you by taking the forms of your known ones, The people too say that we shouldn't reply to a Chalaava's question or statement as it can then infest our soul or kill us.)
    ...
    Afterward I took a wise decision, I replied my mom and took my bottle from downstairs.
    The reason; as I'm more afraid of my mom than any chalaava , As i know what happens when i don't reply to her ��.
    ...
    Then I thought to concentrate on my sleep .As I was trying , I saw something strange...! I saw 2 lights flashing from the area nearby , The one was on a ground level on a folding bed (manja) ,And other was from an house as it was just like a open photo gallery��️
    (They designed this way)
    Then the light from the house changed it form unlikely, I was just feeling like some shadow is trying to hide from something. And i don't know what was more scary .....The light , apparition or the other light noticing it from below. And yeah the light from the open gallery house was humanless ...��
    Then all of a sudden the open gallery house light dissapeared .The light below too dissapeared .
    ....
    Then i again tried to get a sleep , But I can't because the Bloodsuckers were infesting on me so bad.
    That even I can't tell myself that I'm asleep or awake.
    The Bloodsuckers were none other than
    ...
    ..
    .
    mosquitoes (macchar).
    Don't worry the end is near(To the reader)
    Then i saw many scary things from my half open eyes and half asleep state,Some are.....
    •The neighbour's black water tank was moving from its place as it was taking the form of a faceless,Body less creature which appeared like the dark force ,hard to explain .��
    •I saw my teddy sleeping nearby me , But in a blink of the eye, I saw him on the other blue water tank, Hiding and watching me Suspensefully. I don't realise it in a second Because then i closed my eyes for 10 seconds as My body was tired AF,But when I opened my eyes after 10 seconds ,I was scared and completely shook to the core and soul , The reason that i noticed my teddy was just right next to me.
    But i don't know why i think he had changed his position ��.
    .....(My bloody hallucination ��)
    But a good thing that i experience that night was turning the sky from extreme dark sky to the pretty blue sky as the dawn was approaching.
    End Of The Story ||
    .
    (DON'T get me wrong I'm still a night lover,But the experiences I have that night made me crave for the Light blue sky beautifully bidding a goodbye to the stars and making the birds to chirp beautifully as the sun was too dim to be seen, But hopefully i was still accompanied by the Beautiful moon and 2 or 3 stars)
    ....

    Note- I welcome both Suggestions and criticism.So feel free to comment your opinions and feelings.
    .
    P.S.- Don't think the writer's a crack mind, It's a Semi -Fiction
    (Some reality,Some Fiction)
    So just chillax!!!
    #story #horror #suspense #thriller #moon #stars #teddy #dark #sky #disturbing #deep
    #light #paranormal #supernatural #life #night #sleep #darkness #pod

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    The Dark Night :

    A Day Before
    ©uttkarsh_15

  • darkmoon696 16w

    Disturbing poem.
    Surely not for the faint hearted.
    Unintended and purely fictional.

    @writersnetwork @miraquill @mirakeeworld

    #mirakee #miraquill #gory #death #death #scary #blood #disturbing #poem #fear #horror #fiction

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    Disturbing

    Bang bang I go,
    As I drill into her head.
    Cut off her toe,
    Placed all of her on my bed.

    ©darkmoon696

  • mrsinghnota_ 19w

    Died

    FROM "I LOVE DISTURBING YOU,"
    To "SORRY FOR DISTURBING YOU,"

    SOMEWHERE THE FRIENDSHIP
    AND LOVE DIED.

    ©mrsinghnota_

  • sheikh_huzaifa 20w

    World's Tobacco Day is celebrated every year on 31st May. This day is celebrated to awake people who take tabacco and aware them about its effect. This is a hazardous thing which damage lives. Some people do smoking while few take it in pipes.
    Some people who smoke feels that it is good. But, they don't know they are addicted to it. Some people smoke because they are tensed in Life or fed up of things that are happening in their lives. You'll find no solution in Life, if you take tobacco. Instead, of solution! You'll hurt yourself. These are some few reasons but the effect of doing smoking or taking tobacco is so worst that you will first of all hurt yourself and then your family members. While some people smoke in public places or in crowded places. You people are not only damaging your lives. You are damaging whole ecosystem. The smoke of tobacco is deathless. It is not easy for those people to leave that habit. But, slowly slowly you have to leave that habit... If you care for yourself and for your family...
    The effect of it is so worst that it gives rise to various diseases such as Cancer, Heart disease, Stroke, Lung diseases, Diabetes, Tuberculosis, etc. These are some few diseases.....
    We have to take action against it. What will government do? They people have so many other important work to do. We cannot always blame government for it. We have to stand unite and to stop these things in our society as much as we can. First of all, we have to ban that companies that are making and selling these things. Then, we have to ban tobacco and those things which are made up of tobacco.
    Hope! You all understand. And I know you people don't only read this, you'll take step against it. And I know among you who smokes will leave this habit of smoking one day..... Thanks!
    #World #Tobacco #Day #Smoking #Disturbing #Ecosystem #Diseases #mirakee #pod #wod #share

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    ©sheikh_huzaifa

  • uttkarsh_15 21w

    P.S.-One thing I've understood from dark and disturbing movies is demons and devils are not the most creepy and scariest, Humans are the most horrifying creatures of all time
    .
    #dark #disturbing #fear #horror #film #movie #films
    #suspense #thriller #human #nature

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    #Horror_Movie

    .A Normal Horror can creep your body out..
    .
    .A Dark Horror can creep your mind out...
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    But a Disturbing Horror is capable of creeping your soul inside out...
    .
    But when the fact you'll realise the disturbing movie was based upon Real Events ,
    It can creep all the 3 domains together...

  • pureboredom 42w

    #disturbing #horror #creepy
    ( Wanted to try writing a creepy poem hope you enjoy :-))

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    Twisted

    Your always so blissfully unaware my dear.

    I must admit I'm a bit envious of you.

    My eyes could never shine with such delight as yours do.

    My laughs could never sound as jovial as yours do.

    I cannot decide if I adore or despise you.

    In all honesty I hope I never decide.

    You will always be my marvelous enigma.

    Your tragic oblivion shall never be tainted.

    I'm unsure how long you will survive my fascination.

    As you may have noticed I'm unsure of many things.

    Yet, I'm certain that my unhealthy obsession will one day consume you.

    My apologies for that are empty and meaningless.

    Even so, an especially twisted part of me hopes that they bring you some comfort.

  • amoghavarsha 53w

    THE MOST DISTURBING PHRASE IN ENGLISH

    " I LOVE YOU "
    ©amoghavarsha

  • _rakhi 69w

    Yaar Mujhe Father’s Day Wish Karna, Abhi Ki Latest News Aai Thi Ek Bachhi Ki Uske Father & Brother Or Maybe Uncle Ne Bachhi Ka Rape Kiya Tha, Sab Bhar Bhar Ke Whatsapp Post Kar Rahe Hain To Spch Rahi Hun, Me Bhi News Post Ke Sath Wish Kar Doon Father’s Day! Anyways Happy Father’s Day Hamare To Hain Nahi Zinda Apko Mubarak!
    ©_rakhi

  • deepslumber 72w

    Illusive thoughts

    Travelling deep into the dark dungeons,
    Hidden were the morons devouring her gourd, cum and flesh.
    The one who once resided in my heart,
    What remained was her bones and ashes.
    ©deepslumber

  • pri_rag 75w

    A letter from my blade: II

    Lover,
    It's been a while since you thought of me,
    What is it this time? Disappointing yourself again? Or is it your family? Ah. Bingo. It's your mother isn't it. You want to give her everything you have but you have nothing to offer. And you are selfish, so you won't even try. Are the warm tears cascading down your face right now? Do you feel like it is time to give up again? Not everything in life can be perfect, of course you are barely okay. You know what I think will help? Me. I think I can make you better. Don't the scars remind you of better times? Don't you wish the pain wasn't just a memory like an itch that you can't stop scratching? Don't you miss the blood being the warm cascading down you skin and not these childish tears? Don't you want me in your life? That's what I thought.
    Love,
    Yours.
    ©pri_rag

  • harsh77 85w

    Peace

    You are my peace
    which i found in this
    disturbing world❤️
    ©_harsh77

  • yusra_qasim03 86w

    Not too sure about the last paragraph. What do you think?

    @mirakee @writersnetwork @mirakeeworld
    #mirakee #writersnetwork #poetry #words #disturbing #war

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    A room of yellows and blues
    Starts dripping with reds
    A place of beautiful hues
    Starts dripping with bloodshed

    Playing with houses and dolls
    Breaking down glasses and walls
    Playing with trucks and cars
    Will result in wounds and scars

    Children with giggles and laughs
    Bodies with limbs in half
    Beautiful flowers covered in blood
    Entire cities covered in red flood.
    ©yusra_qasim03

  • words_from_heartt 98w

    Sad truth!

    Scared to walk alone,
    Scared to go for a walk after 9 pm,
    Scared to believe people around,
    Scared to travel in the nights,
    Scared after seeing gang of boys,
    Is this the society we are living in after 72 years of Independence?
    Extremely shamed being a part of this society!
    Deeply disturbed being a girl!
    ©minds_eye

  • daivas 103w

    Unbearable Silence

    She was afraid of silence
    so to unlade her thoughts
    so she played her phone
    for music to invade her bone.
    ©daivas

  • alekthepoet 108w

    Our Deed

    A mist blanketed the forest,
    so low and dense we could barely see
    through it, but we kept on digging
    the hole. We had no other choice,
    and there was nowhere else to go.

    The onyx lake pebbly beach
    intimate boat cheap beer
    and jokes loud motor running

    The smell of earth and petrichor
    dispersed her rancid miasma.
    I felt ruefully relieved, but
    the hole was almost complete.
    Tiny eyes peered at us through
    the dark, through the leaves,
    from the trees, but not a chirp
    or tweet was aired. They remained
    silent as we did our deed.

    The wet street we came in on
    truck cabin nail gun hidden
    in the cooler her stupidly
    wonderful laugh
    awful moonlight

    It was finished. We climbed out,
    and I grasped her ankles. We
    swung her and let go. The wind
    passed through with a low groan.

    Burble gracious grin
    looking up at the stars
    snap yelp the start of a cry
    another snap of air escaping
    swollen tongue
    widened eyes

    The putrid miasma disappeared,
    buried along with everything
    else. And then we left. The sun
    crept out from behind the
    mountains as we walked away.
    The birds began their daily dance.

    -
    by ©alekthepoet


    Onyx
    [on-iks, oh-niks]
    noun
    1. Mineralogy . a variety of chalcedony having straight parallel bands of alternating colors.
    2. black, especially a pure or jet black.
    *I use it to refer to the color of onyx, which is white/silver and jet black*

    Petrichor
    [pe-trahy-kawr, ‐ker]
    noun
    1. a distinctive scent, usually described as earthy, pleasant, or sweet, produced by rainfall on very dry ground.

    Miasma
    [mahy-az-muh, mee-]
    Noun
    1. noxious exhalations from putrescent organic matter; poisonous effluvia or germs polluting the atmosphere.
    2. a dangerous, foreboding, or deathlike influence or atmosphere.

    Burble
    [bur-buh l]
    verb (used without object)
    1. to make a bubbling sound; bubble.
    2. a bubbling or gentle flow.

  • missypoetic 110w

    Unappreciated

    Eyes devour tasteless words.
    Sprung up from the depths,
    conniving little snitches.
    Their nails twist and twitch
    dripping in, with disgust
    sipping on the attics secret:
    .
                          it leaks
                  .
    and
                  .
                          it reeks...
                                                   .
                                     .
                       .
    She sits like a falling queen;
    bordered with flaking fake gold
    the lips crumbling dry.
    --caked in old skin,
    many Women scream 'poor Her!'

    ©missypoetic

  • unsaid_lamhe 112w

    Follow my page on Instagram for more shayari
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    ©unsaid_lamhe