We both used to gather maple leaves. Me and her. It was mostly Saturday eves I remember. Her smile made me believe that the world is beautiful. Her fragrance enchanted me and it was really wonderful. I thought we were getting close. So I decided to propose And confess my love. Certain day I chose I bought a rose. She arrived wearing dress cherry Looked like a fairy. Seemed to be in a hurry. Hey I think it's gonna be a special day I wanted to tell you there's a guy We are seeing other since long. I want you to meet him I love him and to him my heart belong. I couldn't say a word Came crashing down my world. After a while she left and also took my soul along. On the same day I wrote a song Whenever I read it I loose control over my heartbeat. I collect glass full of tears And with sad heart I say cheers. Since that day it appears that nostalgic feelings haunt . I have submerged myself in disdain Still her happiness is all I want.
sumiinkedYou're different kind of destruction, you're kindness~ oh wow, this is exquisitely enchanting. And choice of words as usual is awestrucking. There is so much to say, the thoughtfulness you carried out by mere words are of different world. I need words to praise the lines, I quote above.
bonitasarahbabuBrilliant piece honey. I felt your struggle and the pain. Love and prayers coming your way. ❤️
reneewolfcrowdenunezThank you my beloved friend @lovenotes_from_carolyn for the encouragement and for your REPOST it always means so much to me! I love you so MUCH and I've got some really big news, but I'm trying to figure out, 1st that maybe i should wait till when I'll need the most support,or how I'll announce it, maybe a poem? lol buut the doubt in me makes me afraid to bug others, such as you with all YOU have to deal with, already, I mean everybody has their own stuff to deal with.. AND I'm not sure If my self esteem will let me reach out.. especially since I'm sooo bad at getting back to other people, such as you, to tell you and the others, how beautiful your stories are and therefore gives us, the readers, such well written unforgettable poetry! buuut i do try to say how it makes me feel by writing a poem for them and when I've got both feet in my project and FINALLY I will get back to each and everyone of you! The love abounds from inside me, whenever you're all around, especially you my dearest friend here, GOD BLESS YOU AND ALL!!much love and blessings (sorry for going off on a tangent lol) love always, Reneè
lovenotes_from_carolynRenee, I understand and I'd rather you didn't put any undue pressure or stress on yourself; as it's imperative that you do all that you can to minimize harmful energies, so as to build yourself up. You can feel free to tell me anything at any time. It doesn't cause any burden for me whatsoever. I just want you to take good care and do what's best for you at all times. I'm here with a listening ear whenever needed, so don't worry about that. Lots of love and prayers always, and thank you for your very kind sentiments above. ♥️♥️♥️
The winds at the sea Dancing with such a grace. The seagulls are flying with a slower pace. There is chaos around But not much of noise. The sand grains grooving at the pace of tortoise. The distant waters are making some sound. The atmosphere carries some sort of haze. I think the waves and the shore are going to embrace.