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#155
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mystery_in_words 93w
Autumn brings out an yellowish tinge
Leaves as pristine as the morning Sun
Slightly faded to please groggy eyes
That fancy the luscious, yet finite green
Now, wrinkled and shun by the branches
Crunching under relaxed feet walking around
Vaporizing to dust, disappearing into the soil
Only to arise again seasons apart.
©Deepika5 0livingwithstories 154w
His troubled past still had power to consume him completely...Snippet #155 #echoes #livingwithstories #StorytellingWriter #past #troubled #power #haunt #sleep #EchoesOfTheTroubledPast #troubledpast #years #comingback #turnadeafear #untwineme #untwineindia #untwineindia #hootsiren #writerscreed @writersnetwork @mirakeeworld @readwriteunite
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"Nooo..!!! Nooo...!!!", he screamed in his sleep.
His friend on the other bed woke up, and rushed to check what was wrong him.
Shaking his shoulders with some force, he woke him up and exclaimed, "What happened?!"
"Echoes of my troubled past. They keep coming back to haunt me. I hope I could turn a deaf ear to them. It's astonishing how after so many years it still has so much power over me", he replied as he was left completely consumed by his past.
©livingwithstories1 5- aisha_k you write well but pay attention to your grammar . a friendly advice n positive critique . I do some grammatical mistakes too . I am working on it because I love writing ❤️ . have a great day
- aisha_k *same grammatical mistakes i do *
- livingwithstories @aisha_k I really appreciate it. Will work on them definitely. Lemme know what's to be improved on this post.
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aisha_k
@livingwithstories it has to be like this from line number 2 .
His friend on the other bed woke up by his screams. He rushed towards his friend to check up on him. Shaking his shoulders, waking him up he asked, " What happened"?
"Echoes of my past, they keep coming back haunting me. I wish I was a deaf to not to hear them . It is astonishing that after many years it still has power over me", he answered /replied.
He was left completely consumed by his past. - aisha_k plz pardon me if I am mistaken in ( showing you how it has to be. let me know too if I did grammatical mistake in the correction part because like I said I am learning too . @livingwithstories
boy_who_wanders 170w
#155
Current favorite.
Kalank.
#kalank #arijitsingh #hindi #hindiwriters #urdu #love #passion #song #deep #life @mirakee @writersnetwork @the_dead_poetess #kashmiriहजारों में किसी को, तकदीर ऐसी
मिली है एक रांझा और हीर जैसी
नजाने ये ज़माना
क्यों चाहे मिटाना
कलंक नहीं,
इश्क़ है
काजल
पिया9 0 1સાંજ..!?
ક્ષણિક ની બનેલ આ ક્ષિતિજે,
આ સાંજ ને મારા શ્વાસમાં ભરી લઉં?
ધરાને મળવા અધીરા બનેલ,
આ સૂરજ ને ઘડીક અહી થંભાવી લઉં!?
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iti___ 172w
कभी
कभी तुम कुछ बोलो,
कभी हम कुछ बोले !
कभी तुम मीठी यादे याद दिलाओ,
कभी हम मीठी यादे याद दिलाये!
कभी तुम अपनी सुनाओ,
कभी हम अपनी सुनाए !
कभी तुम मेरे जज़्बात समझो,
कभी हम तुम्हारे जज़्बात समझे!
कभी तुम मेरे ख्यालो में आओ ,
कभी हम तुम्हारे ख्यालो में आये !
बस इतनी सी तो ख्वाइश है,बस इतने से तो अरमान है।
©Itu9 0 2#155
चंद लम्हो ने बना दी मेरी कहानी
एक था राजा एक थी राणी।।।
©danny_0073 0shruti_bhatt 181w
Does it have any meaning?
#155
16/01/2019
#Timepass #pod #love #friends
#Fictional #mirakee @writersnetwork#writersnetwork @readwriteunite @mirakeeworld @mirakee @writerstolli.
Yes
You are allowed to
laugh with me
But no
You are not allowed
To cry with me
©shruti_bhatt72 23 7- shruti_bhatt @chintan_prajapati
- dreamy_ Deep one shuta..
- shruti_bhatt @sapana_zapada yes thnx darling
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dreamy_
Most wc..
.shuti. - shruti_bhatt @chandantripathi_
Avoid_Need.
People who avoid love the most,
Are the one who actually need it the most.
People who are often filled with anger,
Are the one who need to be taken care the most.
People who avoid being attached with someone,
Are the one who needs someone to count on.
©relationshipsadvisory14 1 1authoranshupal 183w
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