Tried something!!! Ik, I am late. Anyways.:) Examsuck!!!
Their might be some people who think that writing resilient or different words in their poems makes it look stronger or makes them a better poet. No, you're absolutely wrong. Poetry has nothing to do with complicated language. It should be something that any person can read it and enjoy it the same way we have wrote it. Also, there are many poets who use the tough vocab like tough words or what not but it's their way of writing everyone has different taste, different languages. So, please stop trying to act like you'll look a better poet just by adding some complicated words in your poetry. Poetry is all about FEELINGS, let's not complicate them and make them easy for ourselves and other people too;) I am sorry if anyone among you is hurt or feels like I have particularly written this for someone. I am no one to judge anyone here, neither am I a teacher to teach!!! I just felt like writing so I did. Happy reading.
(Also, I learnt Kwansaba from my cousin @hayaa__ 's book, It's written by some of her teacher of her school "DPS" (CBSE) A great book for literature lovers tho!)
And when he was talking about the colours, he suddenly closed his eyes, and laughed. The smile that took all my worries away. I wonder how the sky bears his smile? It seems the clouds come nearer to hear his voice, And the sun, Tries to hide because surely his smile is brighter and beautiful than anything and I ... I just don't want to stop staring at that smile. His eyes makes me feel everything at once, And his smile, God. His smile gives me everything I ever want, And that's where I feel, May be this is my forever, Yes forever. May be talking to him for a while is forever, Or may be watching him for a while is forever.
Little did he know how much I adore him, And how my mind keep playing his pictures everytime. I wish, it could stay forever, His smile and his hand in my hands?
And then this happened,
I NEVER BELIEVED IN MIRACLES UNTIL I MET HIM. :)
P.s; I had written this years ago and it was too too long but i wanted to keep it precise so that mirakee people can read it without getting bored. :)